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The Birds Plus the Bees

Come over here my beloved … let’s snuggle up together on the old porch swing to enjoy the glory of the setting sun whilst listening to wild birds trilling their sweetest songs We sit together in complete silence observing the pretty butterflies flitting from flower to flower fluttering their colorful bejeweled wings. Stripy bumble bees buzz busily collecting pollen from golden honeysuckle which climbs over the rickety wicker trellis. Your fingers seductively brush my thigh, you give me your ‘knowing smile’ I see the look of love in your blue eyes - then your lips meet mine. Enough of seeing the birds plus the bees you whisper - it’s time for us to go to bed! "A" Lipogram Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet 08/27/20
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Mcgee Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 7:32 AM
I love how you start us off so innocent and end with passion...wonderfully done in the lipogram :D Jeanne
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 4:27 PM
Thanks Jeanne:-) hugs jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 4:20 PM
Jan, congratulations on your top win, loved your sweet bird and bees poem! hugs
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2020 at 4:26 PM
thanks Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Kauffman Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 2:43 PM
Kudos and high fives my friend. So much fun! Lessons on the birds, the bees plus beds win out! Well deserved win! Best wishes coming to you! (trying to omit "A's."
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 3:48 PM
thanks Sam, i even managed to avoid using A in the title too:-) hugs jan xx
Koplin Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 12:36 PM
Congratulations on your win Jan! What a terrific piece, great job!
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 3:47 PM
thanks Mark:-) hugs jan xx
Mcintosh Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 11:39 AM
Congrats, dear Jan. What a wonderful example of this type of poem... Enjoyed so much. God bless you with inspiring words that caress the heart and embrace the soul. Love to you, Gina
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 3:47 PM
thanks Regina i really enjoyed this challenge:-) hugs jan xx
Pinet Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations Jan! Your poem has placed "Second" in my PoetrySoup contest. This was the hardest contest I’ve had to judge, the quality of the poems entered were outstanding and I found yours to be top notch, you should be proud of your work, it is a wonderful poem. Very well done my friend, Emile.
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 9:58 AM
Thanks Emile i am so delighted you liked my poem it was such fun to write:-) hugs jan xx
Watt Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Wishing you even more congratulations for yet another podium win today! Loved revisiting this gem, and am once again in admiration of your diversity of poetic skills. Well done, my friend. Hugs ~ John
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 9:57 AM
Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx
Watt Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 8:08 PM
A romantic little huzzah huzzah tale that makes me smile. Be careful of watching birds and bees on the same bench as your sweetie! Love it, Jan! Wish you all the best in the contest. Hugs ~ John
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 9:56 AM
Thanks John I'm sorry i missed replying sooner:-) hugs Jan xx
Krutsinger Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 12:00 AM
Pens can be put down for the day, more excitement is a foot! Nice one.
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2020 at 9:56 AM
Thanks Caren sorry i missed replying sooner:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:11 PM
Cute!! Enough of each and every bee -- enough poetry! ~ gw
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 7:38 PM
Thanks GW:-) hugs Jan xx
Flaherty Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 12:51 PM
Old but still got it then Jan Happy birds happy bees Happy wife happy marriage Happy ending. Just wrote a poem called My Brittle Brittle wall i hide behind please check it out if you get a chance my friend. Hugs x
Flaherty Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 1:50 PM
Jan after reading your comment your words inspired me to write a poem called Cancers greatest irony of all. Cheers Jan ta
Flaherty Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 1:32 PM
Well then Jan i hope there is many more wishes blessings and good things in your future to cherrish
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 12:54 PM
will drop by your poem Christopher - we will celebrate our pearl anniversary next year - my hubbies cancer has brought us closer together than we ever thought possible and we cherish every day we have together:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 12:43 PM
- Very sweet and romantic, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 1:15 PM
Yes !!!
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 12:52 PM
thanks Anne- Lise its quite a challenge not using the letter A in a poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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