The Birds and Bees

When I learned of the birds and the bees I got dizzy and fell to my knees I saw two flies "dance" My friend saw the chance She taught with a doctor's expertise By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, February 16, 2012 for Birds and the Bees contest (Royal Trevino)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2012 7:06:00 PM

This is GREAT limerick. THAT's HOW IT's DONE.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/19/2012 7:10:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/19/2012 1:22:00 PM

Hmmmmm.......well done!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/19/2012 3:46:00 PM

Thanks for your help! Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/16/2012 7:36:00 PM

Rhonda, great poem... have yourself a good night,..always ;-) PD

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/17/2012 11:19:00 AM

Thanks, PD!! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/16/2012 12:40:00 PM

Cute one..Got a chuckle..That wasn't a very fun way to learn of a very special part of life..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner to me...Your presence at my work was very uplifting..Sara

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/17/2012 11:18:00 AM

Thanks, Sara. You're right. I was six and in shock. I love your work. Blessings, Rhonda

Erich Goller

Date: 2/16/2012 11:15:00 AM

That was a nice lesson you learned. lovely Limerick. Thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/19/2012 3:46:00 PM

It didn't feel so nice at the time! I was about six years old and not ready for the real story. Thanks for the comments. I can look back and laugh about it now. Blessings, Rhonda

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/17/2012 11:14:00 AM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2012 12:28:00 AM

hahaha. I sure recall those days myself!!! Boy, these limericks on birds and bees are going up FAST.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/17/2012 11:14:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea.