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The Birds

Reclined under the shade of a snag tree, A babbler piqued my curiosity. Staggered by the companionship, initially. Then pleased. I discerned a lamenting warble... The massif offered commiserations to him, With an echo. A lorikeet adjoined him, ensuingly And, she twittered a novel... Which was beyond my comprehension. Nefarious humans are certainly not shaped, To perceive this heavenly beauty. His agonised warble was altered; Now sings a euphonious trill. Fare-thee-well, they exclaimed to the departing sun. Much obliged, sings the song of love.

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Date: 2/22/2024 10:27:00 PM
Good one!
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Tapan Nath
Date: 2/22/2024 11:20:00 PM
Thank you so much, please check out my other poem too.... I'd love to get your feedback.
Date: 2/22/2024 5:00:00 PM
delicately conveyed - nicely expressed overall
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Tapan Nath
Date: 2/22/2024 8:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, please check out my other poem too.... I'd love your feedback.

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