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The Bird Fight

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Image result for pictures of a mockingbird and brown thrasher fighting There were a mockingbird and a brown thrasher out at the birdbaths fighting today. LOL..The reason for writing this and also was challenged to try the form Englyn.

Showering in the rain, a mockingbird Unheard chirps, or his pain A brown thrasher knocked him wane Totally off the fast train

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/22/2025 10:54:00 AM

Quite the thrasing about!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/22/2025 11:32:00 AM

You got it Kim. Thanks for the visit and kind review. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/20/2025 1:59:00 AM

- I'm unfamiliar with the form... but enjoy reading your experience with the animals, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/20/2025 2:19:00 AM

Anne-Lise, someone has a contest. That is my first one of those and it might be my last. LOL..Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/19/2025 7:03:00 AM

You have captured the images that you noticed brilliantly, Sara; you are a remarkable one doing this form.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/19/2025 3:22:00 PM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit and comments. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/19/2025 1:16:00 AM

This is a new form and you did very well.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/19/2025 4:08:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2025 3:33:00 PM

Cool one, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/18/2025 5:09:00 PM

Glad you liked it, Andrea. Your visits are always uplifting. Sara K

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/18/2025 2:53:00 PM

Aw, you are an awesome poet Sara, you have caught the imagery of what you had seen so well. GL in contest~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/18/2025 5:09:00 PM

Thank you, Anaya. Thanks for the well wishes. Sara K

Yellow Rose

Date: 6/18/2025 2:07:00 PM

a clever entry into the contest! I've not tried that form...perhaps I should. Best wishes with your contest entry, yellow rose

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/18/2025 5:08:00 PM

I think that it was my first try with that form as well, YW. It was interesting trying to do it so nothing will be lost if it doesn't place. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/18/2025 1:27:00 PM

Love your "The Bird Fight" write. Great Picture... "Good Luck" Yes, this contest on Englyn style took extra time/thought for me but was fun. Have a lovely day writing away............

Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/18/2025 5:07:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by, Paula, with encouragement. Sara K