The Bird Feeder

A birdfeeder hangs on the oak tree.
The sparrows all come there to eat free.
One day a Blue Jay,
Chased them all away.
The Hawk said “Hooray” dinner for me!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Bayles Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 7:14 PM
Nice humor.
Laurie Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 12:17 AM
G'day terri ... and oh how a hawk likes sparrows. Nice limerick terri - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 4:48 PM
Many congrats on your win Terri:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 4:54 AM
Terri, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever limerick!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 7, 2019 at 10:27 AM
I like your humour.
Allison Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 3:40 PM
guess its survival of the fittest Terri!:-) hugs jan xx
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