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The Bird Feeder

A birdfeeder hangs on the oak tree. The sparrows all come there to eat free. One day a Blue Jay, Chased them all away. The Hawk said “Hooray” dinner for me!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Date: 12/2/2019 12:17:00 AM
G'day terri ... and oh how a hawk likes sparrows. Nice limerick terri - Lindsay
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Date: 6/12/2019 4:48:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Terri:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/12/2019 4:54:00 AM
Terri, congratulations on your winning placement with your clever limerick!
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Date: 6/7/2019 10:27:00 AM
I like your humour.
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Date: 6/3/2019 3:40:00 PM
guess its survival of the fittest Terri!:-) hugs jan xx
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