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The Biggest Mistake

I was really nice to you,
I didn't make you feel blue.
even if you make me feel angry
i would still be with you.
You were my friend
my trust in you is big.
But you just crashed all of it
In just one small mistake
I didn't cared about it at all
But you made me look so stupid
I still tried to avoid the fact.
So i just told myself to leave it.
you sent me a note
Saying you're sorry
I forgived you
then suddenly a change of story.
You were mad again
I still didnt care
But you treated me like trash
And thought that i'd be scared.
I didn't got scared at all,
but it got me angry instead
I dont want to feel stupid
and try to forgive you again.
You think you're so strong.
But just prepare
Because starting now,
I'll start the dare.
I was nice to you
and you didnt cared
Now ill reverse it
So it will be fair.
I'll start my revenge
It will be a piece of cake.
And for you, i think,
It will be your biggest mistake.



by K.S

EC

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/18/2016 2:30:00 AM
Hi, Kim... you will be inspired by all of us here... Thanks for the kind reply. Linda
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Date: 3/4/2016 5:45:00 AM
Kim,,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/18/2016 12:07:00 AM
Thanks! Hope to be inspired by all of you here! :)

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