The Big Race Is On

Bang! crackles the gun
  The big race is on
Arms pump the air
  Heads bob everywhere

Legs and feet churn
  Elbows angle, turn
Into the first curve
  Rabbit-swift, they swerve

Perspiration streaming down
  From their chins to the ground
Faces grim, taut and tight
  Heel-toe they alight

As the last bend they round
  Piston-like legs pound the ground
Then the lunge for the tape
  Exhausted, they drape

Their arms o'er each other
Comrades-in-sweat, newly brothers
  ~ Though only the sprinter who's won
     Takes a victory lap when it's done

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 6/4/2019 9:49:00 PM
Yes, Gershon, this makes you a racist. Laughing my sore self silly here. Hahahaha! Great answer to Kim. The poem moves so quickly, I had to re-read it because I galloped through it. It seemed to promote that.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/4/2019 10:04:00 PM
Hi-ho, Silver! Away! ~ Tonto
Date: 6/2/2019 6:29:00 PM
Lotsa good old fashioned action! Enjoyed the race, my friend!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/2/2019 7:56:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Hope your favorite sprinter won... and that writing this doesn't make me a 'racist.' LOL. Thanks for the support! :) gw
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