Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Light Verse

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- the Big Masterpiece -

The jungle of the room

                                             terribly smelly

                                             lacks fresh air

                                                words and

                                               - thoughts

                                       ... like wings on a rock

                                   The pen clinging to my hand

                                            The Masterpiece 

                                           curled and thrown

                                       - a wrecks of the vessel

                                      ... the face becomes pale

                                            steps
                                                   in the
                                                          corridor
                                                                       ...





24/11/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Gordon Mcconnell November 29, 2019 at 9:02 PM Nicely penned Anne-Lise, such good imagery , Blessings and hugs,Gordon Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2019 at 2:23 PM - Many thanks for visiting and your great comment, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf November 28, 2019 at 2:15 PM Gosh. What you have to go through these days just to pen a masterpiece! LOL. Thanks, Anne-Lise. ~ Gershon Anne-Lise Andresen November 29, 2019 at 8:58 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis November 26, 2019 at 3:41 AM Extremely representative of poet's block dearest Anne-Lise, masterfully done! Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2019 at 1:54 PM - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Foster November 25, 2019 at 7:29 PM hehe... Your new pic for the season drew me back. I love your poem, and your style... Excellent... and excellence all the way round. Ann Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2019 at 1:53 PM - Always welcome, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper November 25, 2019 at 2:00 PM How funny I feel that way here in my computer room full of books, crafts, paintings , and filling cabinet full of miscellanies stuff that need to go in the round file..:) I love your poem and the great imagery. Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2019 at 1:53 PM - I just had a big cleanup ... the easiest thing is to close the door, Eve :) - Many thanks for visiting and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Ann Foster November 25, 2019 at 7:30 PM I think your room and mine are very similar... lol...

Chris Green November 25, 2019 at 9:04 AM "Like wings on a rock" Love that line my friend and the entire poem. Just brilliant. The image is really cool as well. Anne-Lise Andresen November 26, 2019 at 1:50 PM - Many thanks for visiting and your great comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh November 25, 2019 at 1:16 AM Lovely poem dear friend. I enjoyed and wish you many more... Love you - Gina Anne-Lise Andresen November 25, 2019 at 3:09 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Quoth Theraven November 24, 2019 at 11:35 PM Anne-Lise , We, of Dunder Mifflin Paper, salute you and the aforementioned Masterpiece(s). -Richard Anne-Lise Andresen November 25, 2019 at 3:09 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams November 24, 2019 at 8:25 PM this picture really gave your words wings, or perhaps the other way around, either way they go good together...been there, great penning Anne-Lise... hugs Anne-Lise Andresen November 25, 2019 at 3:08 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One November 24, 2019 at 2:52 PM omg... thats a lot of paper... surely it is better to use a computer? lol... deep poem.. Anne-Lise Andresen November 25, 2019 at 3:05 AM - That's exactly what I thought too :))) - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos November 24, 2019 at 1:17 PM I can understand your feeling and the pic is awesome! Hugs and blessings my dear friend, Jenny. Anne-Lise Andresen November 25, 2019 at 3:06 AM - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Foster November 24, 2019 at 10:56 AM Wow.... Ann Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2019 at 11:56 AM - Many thanks for your support, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham November 24, 2019 at 9:25 AM That picture made me smile Anne, how often has it been like that but we never give up. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2019 at 11:56 AM - No, we must never give up ... but, many have been thrown away a start that never came to an end ... maybe the best you've written :) - Many thanks for visiting and your comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)