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The Big Bang

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Launch Control: It's a go
He's in love
going where
he's never gone before
with the woman
a light brown goddess
that hurtles him into outer space...

Mission Control: You're go for launch
Launch Control:  Roger
all rockets fire
like lava from a volcano
red orange, yellow flames
I am in zero gravity
as her lips touch mine
I am weightless...

I pass the sun
asking it about the Big Bang
the sun replied
it's great to become...

I wave to Orion
as he faces the charging Taurus
giving them a wink
through my small portal...

I have always dreamed
of exploring the Milky Way
and to see the stars
the way she launches me
from ground zero...

I can't wait
until tomorrow night
to once again
put on my space suit
and board her shuttle
this lady I've dreamed of....

Countdown
to another lift off!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/27/2013 9:08:00 AM
Fantastic! Her, the shuttle, taking you to the stars. A limitless flight on constellation's wing. Wonderful!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/27/2013 10:21:00 AM
Hi Drake, Much appreciated my friend. Ken
Date: 9/24/2013 12:46:00 PM
Wow n i spinned into yor brill astral imagination as i thot great dis is an interstellar romance ride. Unique n admirable for d 21st century. Do pas by mine humbler work d latest.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/24/2013 2:13:00 PM
Hi SK, Thanks for the compliment and visit.. Ken
Date: 9/23/2013 3:31:00 PM
Sounds like you were with a heavenly body... maybe Venus... Terry
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/23/2013 4:53:00 PM
Hi Terry, Very much in close proximity..Thanks for visiting.. Ken
Date: 9/21/2013 9:08:00 PM
Interesting sci - fi metaphor here. Thanks for your comments and keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/21/2013 9:18:00 PM
Hey Matthew, Thank you as well and I sure will.. Regards, Ken
Date: 9/21/2013 11:02:00 AM
Hola Ken; This was very interesting to read and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/21/2013 11:05:00 AM
Hola Lucilla, Gracias por leer... Respecto, Ken
Date: 9/20/2013 4:59:00 PM
Awe, this is quite a precious love poem. Very heart felt poem, my friend! Hugs!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/20/2013 5:03:00 PM
Hi Anne, Thank you for visiting and a lovely compliment today. Your friend, Ken..
Date: 9/20/2013 2:13:00 PM
KEN EXCELLENT PIECE OF WRITING MY FRIEND LIKE A FIRE WORKS EXPLODED BEAUTIFUL
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Date: 9/20/2013 2:17:00 PM
Hey Liam, Thanks old friend for the wonderful compliment... regards, Ken
Date: 9/20/2013 1:05:00 PM
- Really well written, Ken .... love at a high level !!! :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise
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Date: 9/20/2013 1:09:00 PM
Hi Anne, Thank you very much for stopping by today! Regards, Ken
Date: 9/20/2013 9:25:00 AM
A very creative and unique amorous poem this is my dear friend Ken. I was extremely delighted to read it this evening. Thank you so much for sharing and your nice comments in one of my poems. More blessings to you my dear friend. love lots and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 9/20/2013 9:34:00 AM
Hi Leonora, Thank you for the wonderful comment and visit..It's always a pleasure to read your works as well.. Your friend, Ken
Date: 9/20/2013 7:02:00 AM
Interesting work that you have penned..Don't go into unexplored territory though..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/20/2013 8:36:00 AM
Hi Sara, Thanks for dropping by..Good to read from you.. Ken
Date: 9/20/2013 6:03:00 AM
Romance in space. Lovely write..Betty
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Date: 9/20/2013 6:10:00 AM
Hi Betty, Thank you for dropping by.. Ken
Date: 9/20/2013 5:03:00 AM
Very original..Well crafted this beautiful escape to space.Excellent!
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Ken Carroll
Date: 9/20/2013 5:40:00 AM
Charmain, Thank you for the wonderful comment and for visiting.. Ken
Date: 9/20/2013 2:50:00 AM
Very erotic and sensual and amazingly beautiful! GREAT JOB! Being shot into orbit is a beautiful thing...........To my favs!
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Date: 9/20/2013 5:39:00 AM
Hi Eileen, Thank you for the compliment. Ken
Date: 9/20/2013 1:37:00 AM
ha ha its damm nice! really enjoyed this ken
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Date: 9/20/2013 5:38:00 AM
Hey Danesh buddy, Thanks for dropping by..good to read from you. Ken
Date: 9/20/2013 12:02:00 AM
a very interesting and unique way of saying what is in your heart. nice job
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Date: 9/20/2013 12:17:00 AM
Hi Robin, Thanks for visiting again... Ken