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The Big Bang

Time: T minus 3 minutes Launch Control: It's a go He's in love going where he's never gone before with the woman a light brown goddess that hurtles him into outer space... Mission Control: You're go for launch Launch Control: Roger all rockets fire like lava from a volcano red orange, yellow flames I am in zero gravity as her lips touch mine I am weightless... I pass the sun asking it about the Big Bang the sun replied it's great to become... I wave to Orion as he faces the charging Taurus giving them a wink through my small portal... I have always dreamed of exploring the Milky Way and to see the stars the way she launches me from ground zero... I can't wait until tomorrow night to once again put on my space suit and board her shuttle this lady I've dreamed of.... Countdown to another lift off!

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Poet Tacito

Date: 9/27/2013 9:08:00 AM

Fantastic! Her, the shuttle, taking you to the stars. A limitless flight on constellation's wing. Wonderful!

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/27/2013 10:21:00 AM

Hi Drake, Much appreciated my friend. Ken

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 9/24/2013 12:46:00 PM

Wow n i spinned into yor brill astral imagination as i thot great dis is an interstellar romance ride. Unique n admirable for d 21st century. Do pas by mine humbler work d latest.

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/24/2013 2:13:00 PM

Hi SK, Thanks for the compliment and visit.. Ken

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/23/2013 3:31:00 PM

Sounds like you were with a heavenly body... maybe Venus... Terry

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/23/2013 4:53:00 PM

Hi Terry, Very much in close proximity..Thanks for visiting.. Ken

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/21/2013 9:08:00 PM

Interesting sci - fi metaphor here. Thanks for your comments and keep 'em coming! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/21/2013 9:18:00 PM

Hey Matthew, Thank you as well and I sure will.. Regards, Ken

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 9/21/2013 11:02:00 AM

Hola Ken; This was very interesting to read and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/21/2013 11:05:00 AM

Hola Lucilla, Gracias por leer... Respecto, Ken

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/20/2013 2:13:00 PM

KEN EXCELLENT PIECE OF WRITING MY FRIEND LIKE A FIRE WORKS EXPLODED BEAUTIFUL

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/20/2013 2:17:00 PM

Hey Liam, Thanks old friend for the wonderful compliment... regards, Ken

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2013 1:05:00 PM

- Really well written, Ken .... love at a high level !!! :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/20/2013 1:09:00 PM

Hi Anne, Thank you very much for stopping by today! Regards, Ken

Len Gasun

Date: 9/20/2013 9:25:00 AM

A very creative and unique amorous poem this is my dear friend Ken. I was extremely delighted to read it this evening. Thank you so much for sharing and your nice comments in one of my poems. More blessings to you my dear friend. love lots and hugs, Leonora

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/20/2013 9:34:00 AM

Hi Leonora, Thank you for the wonderful comment and visit..It's always a pleasure to read your works as well.. Your friend, Ken

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2013 7:02:00 AM

Interesting work that you have penned..Don't go into unexplored territory though..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Ken Carroll
Date: 9/20/2013 8:36:00 AM

Hi Sara, Thanks for dropping by..Good to read from you.. Ken