The Big Apple

I made a trip to New York
and surely looked like a dork
staring at the sky
scrapery so high
(and sometimes ogled a nork*)

I took a walk to the dock
heard so many kinds of talk
from seething masses
(and some were asses**)
all I could do was just gawk

I went out to Ellis Island
'cause Woodie*** says it is myland
and it is yours too
it just wouldn’t do —
to exclude folks from the high lands

deserts, swamps or wherever.
I think we should endeavor
(since most of us once,
were just immigrants)
to welcome them forever

or give it to first peoples,
tear down our pious steeples.
Stop saying we care
(if it is hot air)
Stop our slaughter of sheeples!

I tend to ramble a lot.
My trip to the melting pot?
Was a WOW I’d say
and maybe one day
I will return at a trot.

Salute to souper Ilene
(a fan of, I’ve always been)
and to that Billy
who is so silly****
They live in that crazy scene!

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asteriskus explanus:

*aussie slang word (google it)
**not all were asses — overall I found New Yorkers much less rude than I had expected (based on what I’d been told) 
***Guthrie - the folksinger
****According to hisself, souper Sillybilly Thekidster
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Not a$$es just feisty and I love it!
Flats Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Salute to the feisties!
P  Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 8:14 AM
We're not rude, merely self-consumed! :) Love this to bits! 7 +fav.
P  Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Used to be, I've since moved, couldn't stand all the rude people. haha kidding. :)
Flats Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Aren't we all! :-) So you're an apple-ite, eh?
Hoffman Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 9:22 PM
Love this write about NYC Lim'rik, very creative & clever!:)
Flats Avatar
October 23, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Thanks CH. Lots to be written about that batch of boroughs, and mach has been written by folks with keener insight than mine:-) cheeriets ~ j
Y. Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 8:52 AM
Hi John, You have penned a good string of limericks. I've never been to Big Apple. But I'm happy that I visited your page to see what you wrote about your visit there:-)Alexis
Flats Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Hi Alexis! So much could be written about NYC, even my paltry short time there was amazing. Got to see the 9-11 memorial which was intensely moving — deserves more than a lim'rik, though, so I won't write about it;-) Loved your footles kiddo. I'll get over to comment on them in a bit. CheeriodiO's ~ j
Smith Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 10:07 AM
if I ever went to that apple of a town...id wish for anything but frowns...dine with the masses...avoid those asses...and salute lady liberty dressed in her glorious gown
Flats Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 10:09 AM
:-) and you're avoidance tactics would be???;-) I came closest to a meltdown on Liberty Island. I nearly started installing "selfie sticks" in the nether regions of folks' anatomy. Hey, I also got a brief look at your town since I had a train layover for a few hours. Watta place! cheerios, limaster
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Great string of limericks John and I would so so love to meet Ilene her humourous poems are superb - maybe I will get to NY one day:-) hugs Jan xx
Flats Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 10:06 AM
Visiting NYC was an eye opener for this small town boy, to say the least. Ilene is an amazing poet. I've often said her poems would make a great column in the newspaper. Congrats on spawning another POTD with the collab!!! huggabunkles ~j
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