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The Bicycle of Life

'Twas once the bicycle of life, started down a cheerful lane, past daisies beneath the sun, when Mary waved at me again, just as my bike hit a bump, And I flew end-over-end, landing hard upon my head - thump! Oh bicycle of life, my friend, why me - to the afterlife you send?

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Date: 8/11/2024 11:13:00 PM
"landing hard upon my head - thump!"... lovely use on onomatopoeia and rhetorical question at the end.
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David Crandall
Date: 8/12/2024 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Wardah!

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