The Betrayal of Brothers

A single error in judgment,
A glimpse of time that follows us,
Generation to Generation.
This clouds our DNA, forcing legacies,
Against fathers and sons,
Brother against brother.
Decisions made,
Apologizes ignored,
Forgiveness asks, and answers become silent.
Those decisions are unforgivable.
God's law, but is it man's law?
Many do not understand,
Others don't care.
Families are broken,
Never to be repaired,
Abels murder,
Cains regret, and,
A debt we can never forget.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 5/1/2024 7:00:00 AM
Dear Shirley, your reflection on the timeless tale is haunting. The weight of decisions and their repercussions across generations echoes through your words. The legacy of betrayal and its toll on families shows the complexities of human relationships. I loved how your portrayal of Abel's murder and Cain's regret encapsulates the enduring themes of remorse and redemption. This is a very evocative piece. Blessings, Daniel
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Shirley Hudson
Date: 5/1/2024 9:09:00 AM
Oh Daniel, thank you so much. That touches my heart. I appreciate your beautiful review of my poem. This is exactly the message I was trying to convey. Thank you for seeing that.
Date: 4/30/2024 11:56:00 PM
A great poem Shirley! Debx
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Shirley Hudson
Date: 5/1/2024 12:33:00 AM
Thanks, Deb, for your kind comments. I hate being morbid, but I often wonder how the past affects us in the future. Ha! I find myself getting philosophical in these early morning hours. Ha-ha! I appreciate your comments; thank you so much.
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