The Best Man a Girl Ever Had

He was the best lil' man a girl ever have 
I was five and he was six
He had red hair and freckles and said the darnest things 
One day we were on the front porch in the swing he looked at me and said sugar
do you know what I want to do I said no daddy cause that what he told me to call him my lil' daddy but he told me he want to take them two cats and tie their tails together and I told him I didn't think that was a good idea but when lil' daddy got it in his head you could not stop him so I told him well we needed to think of some way of holding them cat down to tie them tails so he run to the barn and came back with two corn sacks and we each caught a cat well my cat was a girl and she was tame but lil' daddy got ole tom and he was not so friendly and he started to claw his way out of that sack but lil' daddy wasn't going down without a fight and tom gave him one lil '  daddy was bloody from the top of his head to the bottom of his arms but tom did get his tail tied to my cat she wasn't no more happier that tom when mama heard the noise she came a runnin' with a switch and tanned our hides but by this time the cats already got loose

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Date: 9/23/2014 4:59:00 PM
Patricia, Congratulations, In Regina's "Special Memory" contest..... Have a nice one, LINDA
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Patricia Bernard
Date: 9/23/2014 7:36:00 PM
Thanks I enjoyed the stroll down memory lane......Tricia
Date: 9/19/2014 9:47:00 PM
that was a funny story. What ever happened to that six year old redhead boy?
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Patricia Bernard
Date: 9/19/2014 11:38:00 PM
Well I moved off and lost track of him but last I heard he married and had two kids and nither had red hair. tricia thanks
Date: 9/19/2014 4:24:00 PM
I couldn't help but laugh hearing this story Patricia, but only because you and lil daddy were so young. So cute. Congratulations on your win.
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Patricia Bernard
Date: 9/19/2014 11:41:00 PM
Thanks so much glad you enjoyed it and I wouldn't have rememberd if mama had not got our bottoms Tricia
Date: 9/19/2014 5:49:00 AM
congrats on the win, Patricia
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Patricia Bernard
Date: 9/23/2014 7:39:00 PM
I did so enjoy the walk down memory lane with lil' daddy I am so sorry to have lost touch with him.....Thanks Tricia
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