The Berries

A stalk of berries
Mem’ries of a playful child
Imagination that turns 
Poison into pleasure
Reality into fantasy
Berries.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 11:08 AM
Interesting write that leaves the reader open to go in several directions. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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February 3, 2010 at 1:54 AM
Laura love this piece - thanks for your comment on my work it is most appreciated and you are right - I am English - I come from a small city near the scottish border called Carlisle - it is a lovely place, full of history with a cathedral and a castle and many ties to the romans (worth googleing)- I'm sure you would love it. Love Janette
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