The Berlin Wall

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Drenched in tears, I wrench in response to the pain I sense. Caused by wrong desirers, walls, guards, and the electric fence. Put here to stop free choice by man, To keep him from becoming all that he can. To hold imprisoned, crushing hopes and dreams. To in flick hurt and pain, I can hear the screams. Today, though they’ve been torn to their foundation, They, once again, become a free people nation. They now have hopes and dreams, both the young and old. Thanks to many that died and many that were bold. The challenges will be hard, but their hearts are filled, With a burning desire, their lives to rebuild.

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Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/28/2025 5:28:00 AM

I really like how this poem captures the struggle and hope all in one. The tough imagery of fences and walls makes the fight feel real, but the ending leaves you feeling optimistic. It’s like a shout-out to anyone pushing through hard times. Simple but powerful!

David Crandall

Date: 7/27/2025 4:32:00 PM

Powerful writing! It's great that East Germany became free. I remember when the wall fell.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 7/27/2025 4:26:00 PM

Your poem speaks to the generational power of the infamous Berlin Wall. I remember watching the news coverage of when the wall was brought down...such a watershed moment for the German people. Your words captured so much and is beautifully and compassionately written. Well done! me