Notes About The Poem

Date written: 03/22/2026

The Bend of The River


and
     so
         it
        begins...
            as
               melted
                    snow,
                        a
                       trickle
                    seeking
                a path
            to
        wind...
     the
  river
snakes
  through
    limestone
        deep,
            while
                willows
                    lean
                        and
                            fishes
                                sleep.
                            around
                        the
                    bend
                it
            sweeps
        along,
    humming
  a
silver,
  ceaseless
    song;
        no
            rock
                can
                    stem
                        its
                            steady
                                flow,
                            to
                       oceans
                    they
                flow,
              to
          oceans
        they
     flow.
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La France Avatar
April 26, 2026 at 5:32 PM
Edward, I love this, so creative, wonderfully penned, well done ~
La France Avatar
April 29, 2026 at 4:36 AM
Edward, may I try creating a poem using your shape layout ?
Ibeh Avatar
April 28, 2026 at 6:14 PM
Thank you very much, Constance:-) I'm glad you did!
George Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 5:16 AM
Beautiful shape poem. Feel like watching the zig sag flow of a river.
Ibeh Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 6:34 AM
Thank you so much, Valsa:-)
Kitchin Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 3:43 AM
Ed, a beautiful and creative poem.
Ibeh Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 3:55 AM
Thank you so much, Tania:-)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 11:04 PM
A great shape poem, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 3:55 AM
Thank you very much, Subimal:-)
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