Notes About The Poem

Please also read 'Les soirées de Paris' By Robert Stoner Jr which was inspired by my poem and was written from the male perspective

Contest: Ballroom Delights
Sponsor Isaiah Zerbst
~awarded 1st place~
~awarded 3rd place~PD Best poem of 2014~

 

Listen to poem:

The Belle of the Ball

My dress is made of fine peach coloured lace Hair is in ringlets, which frames my pretty face The lights in the room cast a romantic glow My first ever ball; I must go with the flow The orchestra strikes up a wonderful tune Ladies and gentlemen glide round the room I stand on the sidelines I am oh so very shy Then a dashing young man catches my eye I smile at him, then I coyly avert my eyes I find him so handsome; that I cannot disguise He reaches tenderly for my awaiting hand We move to the dance floor; oh it is so grand His arm wrapped around my tiny waist We dance to the music, there is no haste So full of excitement at the hope of romance I float round the room at my very first dance At the end of the dance he bows down low My heart is aflutter I hope this does not show He leads me gently to the side of the room Sweet roses enchant us, we smell their perfume Time flies by so fast and we dance all night He looks in my green eyes and to my delight Whispers so gently those words I long to hear You simply are the belle of the ball my dear He reaches out gently and kisses my hand My first ever ball has been oh so grand Sadly now it is time for me to depart I bid adieu to the man who has stolen my heart 4/1/19 2019 Poetry Marathon Final Placement Sponsor: Mark Toney 11~15~14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12345
Flaherty Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 1:48 PM
This is worthy of Jim Bowen catchphrase he would say on Bullseye Jan Because it's quite frankly Super , Smashing , Great , Fantastic Sometimes early writes are worthy of revisiting like this. Ringlets which frame a pretty face Courting innocence The simplest tantalizing of the senses The best of all being whispered the sweetest temptation You are the Belle of the Ball. Can not find fault Jan my favorite poem of yours and so glad to see it was a winner
Flaherty Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 2:38 PM
I thoroughly loved it Jan Enthralling i think we know instantly deep down inside when we have written something noteworthy like you said you hold it close dear and instills a sense of pride. Hugs xxxx
Allison Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 2:00 PM
thanks Christopher I am so proud of this piece i used to try SO hard with my imagery for Isaiah's contests. I've never thought about re posting an earlier work! hugs jan xx
Flaherty Avatar
August 20, 2020 at 1:52 PM
Just a thought Jan, I think this would be worth reposting currently again for those new members who may not have come across it 1st time around Cheers thanks for putting me on to it
Goldsmith Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 10:30 AM
Congratulations on your win. In the picture, I can see them dancing and hear the music playing as you tell the story in your poem. A great write and picture. Enjoy your win and day..........
Allison Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 10:33 AM
Thanks Paula I was so proud of this poem I wrote it the year I joined - I LOVED Isaiah's contests and tried so hard with my imagery its lovely to get a chance for the poem to be seen again:-) hugs Jan xx
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 12:42 PM
Hello Andrea, she is sad because she had to leave the Ball. Have a nice day my friend.
Allison Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 1:26 PM
Thanks Darlene:-) hugs Jan xx
Buck Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 1:47 PM
Jan: All this piece lacks is the "glass slipper". It is a lovely poem. Thank you for sharing such a tender moment. :o) That was my comment 8/9/2015 when it captured my heart. Thank you for sharing your work with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
Allison Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:44 PM
Cheers old buck , gosh this is an old poem. I used to love writing for Isaiah contest prompts he was always so encouraging to me as a novice to poetry:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:45 PM
Let me know if you ever hear from Isaiah.
Allison Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:42 PM
I ha e mailed him in the past but sadly no response from him I think he's doing church work but i may be incorre t:-( i miss him he was such a lovely man:-( hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2019 at 3:44 PM
Dear JAn, sorry they did not give out trophies in the year this got first place . My Cinder Girl was during a time of no trophies too. Congrats on your HM. You were fairly high considering all the many people who were entering this marathon and that is "No small potatoes". I enjoyed the funny thing you said over at Mark's blog and I enjoyed hearing your poem just now read with your English ACCENT!! (was it always there that way?) I do not remember hearing the recording before.
Allison Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:40 PM
Yes the audio has always been there:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 11:05 PM
We're in good company, Jan.
Allison Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:39 PM
Thanks line, so sorry for not replying sooner:-( hugs Jan xx
Toney Avatar
April 20, 2019 at 5:43 PM
Jan, after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest has finally come to its end. Congratulations on placing 24th overall in the marathon! There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. Your participation in my contests is much appreciated. ~Mark
Allison Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Thanks Mark, so sorry I missed replying before:-( hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 7:43 PM
Back with more congrats, Jan. Well done.
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 7:45 PM
Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 3:13 PM
How wonderful to see you on the list with your pretty poem, Jan. Congrats to you again with a win with your Belle of the Ball. (I am remembering Isaiah and his contests right now and wondering... what became of him??)
Allison Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 3:43 PM
I used to adore Isaiah's contests and worked so so hard on my imagery for this poem I am really proud of it. It could do with a tweak here and there but I'd only been posting 9 months when I wrote it and I've come a long way since then!:-) Isaiah posted a poem recently i mailed him but as yet no response:-( hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 5:50 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! GREAT story Janice
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:30 PM
thanks so much Janice:-) hugs Jan xx
Toney Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 5:33 PM
Jan, congrats on your win on mile 7 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. This rhyme is so lovely I could hear the music as I read it :) ~Mark
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:27 PM
Thanks so much Mark, I was absolutely delighted when a blogger in the US picked up on the poem and used it on her review for the Cinderella film!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 5:26 PM
Very sweet, Jan. Congrats on your fine win.
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:25 PM
sorry I didn't reply sooner Line:-( hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Congrats, Jan, lovely. Well done, me.duck! Viv
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:25 PM
cheers me dear, sorry for the delay in replying:-( hugs Jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 3:43 AM
Congrats Jan on your fine win.
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:24 PM
So sorry I missed replying before Subimal I don;t know why I didn't reply earlier:-( hugs Jan xx
Mandani Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Very nice. O belle of the ball, oh thou so grand!
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:19 PM
I'm so sorry I missed replying Abdul I don't know why I didn't reply before:-( hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:29 AM
Congrats on your win Jan. Tom
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:16 PM
so sorry I missed replying Tom I don't know why I didn't reply sooner:-( hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
February 23, 2018 at 10:23 AM
such a great story told sweet Jan, great poem thank you and congrats :) -luloo
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 7:15 PM
I'm so sorry I missed replying LuLoo i don;t know why I didn't reply earlier:-( hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 28, 2017 at 8:12 PM
This is a classic Jan...filled with romantic passion! I came here to read it after seeing it mentioned on Becca's blog. Brava! : )
Allison Avatar
October 29, 2017 at 6:45 AM
Thanks Connie I tried so hard with the imagery for Isaiah's contest and was rewarded with a first place - the poem got picked up by a lady in the US who does blogs of film reviews and she used it for her review of 'beauty and the beast':-) hugs jan xx
Schneiter Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 12:02 PM
I have already commented on this. I cannot, however, resist commenting again. The story, imagery, flow, and rhyme--virtually everything--make this poem a classic. It is, in a word, superb . . . one of my all-time favorites here on Soup. Thanks for creating it, Jan.
Allison Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 7:05 AM
I'm sorry I've just found your comment:-) Thanks Paul I am very fond of this poem I loved the picture Isaiah found to inspire us:-) hugs Jan xx
Mudge Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 8:17 PM
Nicely crafted work. I like this story. I can see why you won. Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 6:47 PM
Thanks John I used to love Isaiah's contests the pictures he found to inspire us were wonderful:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Hi Jan, I enjoyed the elegant vibe of this piece. It was so romantic. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Allison Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 6:47 PM
Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 11:46 AM
Jan, this is so romantic, yet sad..lovely poem lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest (sorry for the late comment) :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Thanks so much LooLooLoo after the poems lol. I can't keep up with commenting at the moment:-( hugs Jan xx
Nusker Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 11:44 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jan
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Thanks Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 11:20 PM
Congrats on your placing high. Well done with this lovely write. :) Sunita
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Thanks Sunita:-) hugs Jan xx
12345
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace