The Belle of the Ball

My Christmas tree in sparkling dress stands in my window to impress. She smiles at all the passersby. She waves hello. She is not shy. She winks at all the trees she sees in nearby houses on the street. She seems to shiver with delight counting the minutes till midnight. For one late hour wakened from sleep through the dark house on slippered feet I crept, while up, to catch a glance of tinseled Christmas ambiance. Outside the window daintily danced my glittering Christmas tree! With others down the street and back! They twirled around the cul-de-sac! Amazed I gazed quiet and still, propped against the window sill, till tired but thrilled I left to resume much needed rest in my bedroom. I heard giggling in early light when she slipped in and stood just right. But, she leaves needles everywhere and ornaments dropped here and there. She’ll have her fun till New Year’s Day, then take a nap all tucked away. Next year she’ll dress and dance again with all her many merry friends. 12/11/2018

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Date: 1/28/2021 1:02:00 AM
Dear Awtry, Enjoyed your poem on the Christmas Tree. The opening lines are excellent: "My Christmas tree in sparkling dress stands in my window to impress. She smiles at all the passersby. She waves hello. She is not shy." Keep it up.
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Date: 2/1/2021 3:10:00 PM
thank you for your encouragement :) ~ps
Date: 12/20/2018 9:47:00 AM
I LOVE this! Janice
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Date: 12/20/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 12/17/2018 4:10:00 PM
PS, beautifully penned, a winner for sure !
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Date: 12/17/2018 5:00:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it. I have read so many great entries for this contest. :)
Date: 12/16/2018 1:01:00 PM
This is so adorable and clever (and fun)... LOVE it! ;)
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Date: 12/16/2018 2:12:00 PM
Thank you, Rhona for your visit and your encouraging words. I am so glad you liked it :)
Date: 12/12/2018 9:23:00 PM
Absolutely fabulous poem! Love it a favorite for me.
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Date: 12/14/2018 3:47:00 PM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 12/11/2018 8:05:00 PM
The Christmas tree dance sounds wonderful. I'll have to keep an eye on my tree. P.S. good luck on contest.
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Date: 12/11/2018 8:08:00 PM
Thank you Wren. This one took me a while. I had the beginning and end but really had to wrestle with the middle. hmmm... like life itself :)
Date: 12/11/2018 7:56:00 PM
I looked up to see if you had labeled this personification, as I think it is a terrific example of it. I had not even noticed the rhyming I was so thrilled with your terrific job at personification. I really liked this so much!
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Date: 12/11/2018 8:04:00 PM
it is now officially "personification." Thank you.
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Date: 12/11/2018 8:01:00 PM
thank you, Caren! Maybe I should... So glad you liked it!
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