The Belle of the Ball

My Christmas tree in sparkling dress stands in my window to impress. She smiles at all the passersby. She waves hello. She is not shy. She winks at all the trees she sees in nearby houses on the street. She seems to shiver with delight counting the minutes till midnight. For one late hour wakened from sleep through the dark house on slippered feet I crept, while up, to catch a glance of tinseled Christmas ambiance. Outside the window daintily danced my glittering Christmas tree! With others down the street and back! They twirled around the cul-de-sac! Amazed I gazed quiet and still, propped against the window sill, till tired but thrilled I left to resume much needed rest in my bedroom. I heard giggling in early light when she slipped in and stood just right. But, she leaves needles everywhere and ornaments dropped here and there. She’ll have her fun till New Year’s Day, then take a nap all tucked away. Next year she’ll dress and dance again with all her many merry friends. 12/11/2018
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Ponnambalam Avatar
January 28, 2021 at 1:02 AM
Dear Awtry, Enjoyed your poem on the Christmas Tree. The opening lines are excellent: "My Christmas tree in sparkling dress stands in my window to impress. She smiles at all the passersby. She waves hello. She is not shy." Keep it up.
Awtry Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 3:10 PM
thank you for your encouragement :) ~ps
Canerdy Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 9:47 AM
I LOVE this! Janice
Awtry Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Thank you :)
La France Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 4:10 PM
PS, beautifully penned, a winner for sure !
Awtry Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 5:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it. I have read so many great entries for this contest. :)
Mcferran Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 1:01 PM
This is so adorable and clever (and fun)... LOVE it! ;)
Awtry Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 2:12 PM
Thank you, Rhona for your visit and your encouraging words. I am so glad you liked it :)
Mcguire Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 9:23 PM
Absolutely fabulous poem! Love it a favorite for me.
Awtry Avatar
December 14, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Thank you so much :)
Rushing Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 8:05 PM
The Christmas tree dance sounds wonderful. I'll have to keep an eye on my tree. P.S. good luck on contest.
Awtry Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 8:08 PM
Thank you Wren. This one took me a while. I had the beginning and end but really had to wrestle with the middle. hmmm... like life itself :)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 7:56 PM
I looked up to see if you had labeled this personification, as I think it is a terrific example of it. I had not even noticed the rhyming I was so thrilled with your terrific job at personification. I really liked this so much!
Awtry Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 8:04 PM
it is now officially "personification." Thank you.
Awtry Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 8:01 PM
thank you, Caren! Maybe I should... So glad you liked it!
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