Notes About The Poem

December 26, 2023    

For Brian Strand's Your Choice Contest

------------------------------------–-----------

 

 

 

 

 

The Bell Tolls

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ horizon dark the n i g h t fills me like still sorrow as birds return to nests from sad sky bringing on their wings the distant music of the drifting clouds from the departing day sinking slow in the horizon I hear in the wind on which floats the chime of a far away bell ringing a soft voice of someone calling that sets me to a journey inward where I find my soul silently asking from behind a shroud mystic for whom the bell tolls for me ?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Drowley Avatar
May 27, 2023 at 1:50 PM
Subimal, Congratulations on your win. Well Donne!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 9:54 PM
Thank you, David.
Canerdy Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 6:52 AM
Subimal, a big CONGRATS on your win with this creative, moving piece. Janice
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 9:53 PM
Thank you, Janice for your visit and comment.
Daniel Avatar
May 26, 2023 at 1:06 AM
Great shape, Subimal, congratulations:)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 9:53 PM
Thank you, Joanna.
Kendrick Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 5:10 AM
Very creative. I am sure this one was not so easy to do. Congrats on your win. Sara
Agustin Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 1:40 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
George   Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 9:10 PM
WONDERFUL SHAPE AND VERSE, DEAR SUBIMAL. ~ Elaine
Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 11:24 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Subimal :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 2:44 PM
Well done, Subimal. Congrats on your winning poem.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 11:59 PM
Thank you, Line.
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 3:56 AM
beautifully penned subimal, so glad this was on the winners list:-) hugs Jan xx
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 3:59 AM
Thank you so much, Jan.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 10:01 AM
An absolutely beautiful composition Subimal. Thank you and congratulations! xomo
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 1:31 AM
Thank you, Maureen.
Dutta Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 12:02 AM
Congrats to win in this wonderful shape n composition
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 4:13 AM
Thank you.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 10:53 PM
This is a beauty Subimal, both in shape and content! ! Congratulations on your win! : )
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 4:13 AM
Thank you so much, Connie.
Rowe Avatar
September 19, 2018 at 10:22 PM
Not sure how great poems like this somehow slip through the cracks without a comment. I loved this one and am so glad you placed in the contest so I got the chance to read it.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace