The Beheading of St John the Baptist

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Caravaggio ~ 1608 

The red blood spilling from the Baptist's cut throat bears the artist's signature.

I stood hidden in the shadows, watching
as Salome, clad in flowing veils, gyrated
to the music, exuding sensual richness.
Herod leered drunkenly at her vibrant body.
Overcome by uncontrolled lusty desire
he promised her anything that she wished for
and, prompted by her evil mother, she asked
for the head of John the Baptist on a plate. 
Reluctantly, all eyes on him, including guests, 
he was compelled to grant her strange request.

I stood hidden in the shadows, watching.
The condemned man was dragged outside
and roughly bundled to the floor, unresisting,
held by the executioner’s steely grasp
whose dagger swiftly slit his life away.
An old woman clasped her head between her hands,
shocked and fearful at the sight of oozing blood, 
in horror listening to the janitor’s final bidding.
The keen young maiden held a gold container
ready to receive the freshly severed head 
of an innocent man. The old woman cried, in vain. 

I stand hidden in the shadows, watching the years
roll by, a silent witness within a gilded frame.

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Within a Gilded Frame: A masterpiece by Caravaggio
“The Beheading of St John the Baptist” prominently
displayed in St. John’s Co-Cathedral, Valletta, Malta.

© paul callus ~ 13th May 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/15/2016 11:26:00 PM
There are many dramatic scenes in the Bible that seem all too brief, one can't help but elaborate the details, and put yourself in that position ... John had a grisly and barbaric end to say the least. An excellent narrative to set the tone for the painting ... "A silent witness within a gilded frame" ... powerful ending line.
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Date: 5/16/2016 4:09:00 PM
Hi Timothy!! Pleased to have you stopping by! As you say, the Bible is full of dramatic scenes; many of them have inspired music, paintings, novels, films, and poetry! We Maltese are lucky to have had Caravaggio living on our island...he contributed to several works of art which adorn our churches. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 5/14/2016 6:25:00 PM
An excellent rendition of the horrible travesty of justice. I don't care what anyone says, as king Herod had the power to over ride that law but God had His way anyway. That's what goes on when evil people are allowed to take office and run countries. The innocent pay the supreme sacrifice. Great job here my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/16/2016 3:48:00 PM
Thank you for stopping by with meaningful feedback, Judy. So glad that you enjoyed this narrative. Blessings and take care. // paul
Date: 5/14/2016 1:10:00 PM
- Glad that I did not live in the 1600s .... Impressive written a sad story behind, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/14/2016 1:44:00 PM
The world has never been at peace with itself, Anne Lise! Atrocities, wars, etc are the signature of the ugly side of human behavior. Notwithstanding all this, we must never cease to make the world a better one than we have found it...despite all odds! Hugs and enjoy the weekend:) // paul
Date: 5/14/2016 9:07:00 AM
We all benifited from the inspiration. The picture adds to the impact of your writing.
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Date: 5/14/2016 9:21:00 AM
Thank you for coming back again, Richard. Regards // paul
Date: 5/14/2016 12:05:00 AM
Oh what evilness can make a woman do(could be man too)...But faith and truth will always set men free..If not in this world..in the better one to follow.Awesome Paul.
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Date: 5/14/2016 9:32:00 AM
Thank you Charm! I always enjoy reading your feedback:) This was meant for the contest, but I was too late posting it! ~ Have a lovely weekend. // paul
Date: 5/13/2016 10:37:00 PM
Paul, this is amazing! Beautifully written! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/14/2016 9:29:00 AM
Thank you for the generous comments, Kim:) You never fail to visit without words of encouragement! ~ Warm regards // paul
Date: 5/13/2016 8:44:00 PM
Herodias was very clever. I liked your poem.
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Date: 5/14/2016 9:19:00 AM
Herodias was clever and evilly calculating; she hated John because his words did little to appease her troubled conscience. Thank you for reading and liking, Rob. All the best. // paul
Date: 5/13/2016 6:15:00 PM
Well expressed Paul, it should definitely very well.
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Date: 5/14/2016 9:00:00 AM
I missed out on a slot, Richard, but I still posted it under "Within a Gilded Frame" to show that this was inspired by this specific contest. Thank you and have a nice day. // paul
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