The Beginning That Ended

Standing fifth in position
Is something 
Terribly unpleasant 
When once was first
All the things stood before me 
And I collapsed in soreness
Smiling while suffocating 
Laughing while prisoner of fears
Trying to keep to top 
While all the fences are high
And all the friends are fake?
I never wiped the tears of that day 
I never got over it 
I fell from the fences
With more force
And got hurt 
I landed on cactus ground
I spared my life from the lions
I ran from the real jungle 
My hair got caught in the trees
I refused to look back 
My tears watered rain on the small flowers
My feet bleed from the thorns
The sky started raining 
I slipped and fell on my face
The thorns pierced my skin 
I got up 
While my face and body was bleeding  
The lions were there 
They were chasing me 
As I ran faster 
My head bumped into a tree branch 
I fell on the grass 
The lion approached me smoothly 
Surrounding my body terrifyingly 
And manifesting to the others lions
I am his prey 
So that they all walked away 
As the beautiful mammal came closer
And I lost all hope of survival 
Surprisingly the lion started licking me gently 
He started licking my wounds from blood
Leaving my skin smooth and soft
And I opened my eyes
To find his gorgeous blue looking at my honey brown 
He stopped licking me as I tried to stand 
But instead I sat 
And played my hand
Through his thick hair 
And smiled…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/24/2010 3:42:00 AM
Very creative and interesting write. I enjoyed it, louzana
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