Seren Roberts Poet Rhyme

The Bee - Show Me Funny Contest

He sat there with a bee on his nose
Its his own fault this has occurred
Stuck his nose in the lavender
Now covered in pollen, looks absurd

His eyes are near crossed
As he looks at the bee
Thinking dare i move
Or will the blighter sting me

So like a statue the dog just sat
Dare i tell him the bee is a fake
Was put in the lavender as a joke
Will he hate me when from his nose i take.



Penned 9 july 2013

 Andrea's Contest  :Show Me Funny

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Terry O'Leary July 9, 2013 at 6:48 AM I got the point... very funny... Terry

Russell Sivey July 8, 2013 at 10:08 PM Unless you find out that your forgot that you didn't put the fake bee on there...and then grabbed the bee...ouch! I loved this write and how it progressed, My favorite stanza is the second stanza, it flowed so very well and was a good overall stanza! I loved reading the delightful poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!