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The Beauty of You

The beauty of you Ups and downs in life This beautiful journey If life was just good days It’d be flat just like the Prairies But its not And neither are you As much as we are the same We are different too Our beauty lies within Sometimes it is in a dark place Sometimes it is hidden This beauty of yours Is not just your reflection This beauty is in your mind and heart True beauty is inside you Locked away like precious art Please see the signs Please find the clues The true beauty of today The true beauty of you Is who you are deep down And all that you have been through Kale Brereton 5/1/2018 https://www.thefreethinkinghuman.com/

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Date: 9/6/2018 11:09:00 AM
Hi Kale, Beauty within lies deep in our very souls. well written. thank-you for sharing. Jenny Proxenos.
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Date: 8/20/2018 4:22:00 PM
Deeply stated indeed.
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Date: 8/8/2018 4:21:00 PM
Well penned. Enjoyed the reads---all of them. I like your style. Thanks for sharing. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe
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Date: 8/8/2018 9:37:00 AM
Nice one!!!
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Date: 8/8/2018 9:05:00 AM
In a word, sublime. It made my day, thank you
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Date: 8/8/2018 9:04:00 AM
In a word, sublime. It made my day, thank you
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Date: 8/8/2018 7:43:00 AM
Beuatiful read! I love the flow of your writing.
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Date: 8/7/2018 8:42:00 PM
Simply beautiful...
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Date: 8/7/2018 8:41:00 PM
Simply beautiful...
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Date: 8/7/2018 8:40:00 PM
I really think this is simply beautiful....
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Date: 8/7/2018 8:39:00 PM
I really think this is simply beautiful.
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Date: 8/7/2018 7:05:00 PM
Kale, I can only say that this touched my heart. Beautiful. Thank you!
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Date: 8/7/2018 6:44:00 PM
Thank you, Kale. Beautifully written truth.
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Date: 8/7/2018 6:15:00 PM
Heck yea. Wonderful peom kale brereton!!-michael Ruiz M.R.M.M
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Date: 7/14/2018 11:07:00 AM
Beauty is an attitude birthed in one's soul. It's a vulnerable child that can be destroyed by negative influence (internal or external). But if it's protected it blooms and the bearer of such beauty radiates. A positive life energy comes off of them and affects all who see her peddles!
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Kale Brereton
Date: 7/15/2018 10:50:00 AM
your comment is poetry itself! thank you so much for the thoughtful comment! I agree with all that you say!
Date: 6/10/2018 6:21:00 PM
Hello Kale, I feel beautiful every day. I have always felt this way. Haved a nice evening my friend,.
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Kale Brereton
Date: 6/10/2018 6:35:00 PM
Feeling beautiful, is a beautiful thing:) thank you so much for your support and comment!
Date: 5/26/2018 12:05:00 PM
Very nice Kale :)
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Kale Brereton
Date: 5/27/2018 10:33:00 AM
thank you so much for the support! it means a lot coming from such a talented writer such as yourself!

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