Kale Brereton Poet Rhyme

The Beauty of You

The beauty of you

Ups and downs in life
This beautiful journey
If life was just good days
It’d be flat just like the Prairies

But its not
And neither are you
As much as we are the same
We are different too

Our beauty lies within
Sometimes it is in a dark place
Sometimes it is hidden
This beauty of yours
Is not just your reflection

This beauty is in your mind and heart
True beauty is inside you
Locked away like precious art

Please see the signs
Please find the clues
The true beauty of today
The true beauty of you

Is who you are deep down
And all that you have been through


Kale Brereton
5/1/2018

https://www.thefreethinkinghuman.com/

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Jennifer Proxenos September 6, 2018 at 11:09 AM Hi Kale, Beauty within lies deep in our very souls. well written. thank-you for sharing. Jenny Proxenos.

J Hamilton Gist August 20, 2018 at 4:22 PM Deeply stated indeed.

Millard Lowe August 8, 2018 at 4:21 PM Well penned. Enjoyed the reads---all of them. I like your style. Thanks for sharing. Peace and Love, Millard Lowe

Karen Edwards-Gregory August 8, 2018 at 9:37 AM Nice one!!!

Kumkazi Mhlongo August 8, 2018 at 9:05 AM In a word, sublime. It made my day, thank you

Kumkazi Mhlongo August 8, 2018 at 9:04 AM In a word, sublime. It made my day, thank you

Tanesha Wells August 8, 2018 at 7:43 AM Beuatiful read! I love the flow of your writing.

Saudia Holmes August 7, 2018 at 8:42 PM Simply beautiful...

Saudia Holmes August 7, 2018 at 8:41 PM Simply beautiful...

Saudia Holmes August 7, 2018 at 8:40 PM I really think this is simply beautiful....

Saudia Holmes August 7, 2018 at 8:39 PM I really think this is simply beautiful.

Gabrielle Jordan August 7, 2018 at 7:05 PM Kale, I can only say that this touched my heart. Beautiful. Thank you!

Kevin Lawrence August 7, 2018 at 6:44 PM Thank you, Kale. Beautifully written truth.

Michael Ruiz August 7, 2018 at 6:15 PM Heck yea. Wonderful peom kale brereton!!-michael Ruiz M.R.M.M

Lyric Man July 14, 2018 at 11:07 AM Beauty is an attitude birthed in one's soul. It's a vulnerable child that can be destroyed by negative influence (internal or external). But if it's protected it blooms and the bearer of such beauty radiates. A positive life energy comes off of them and affects all who see her peddles! Kale Brereton July 15, 2018 at 10:50 AM your comment is poetry itself! thank you so much for the thoughtful comment! I agree with all that you say!

Darlene De Beaulieu June 10, 2018 at 6:21 PM Hello Kale, I feel beautiful every day. I have always felt this way. Haved a nice evening my friend,. Kale Brereton June 10, 2018 at 6:35 PM Feeling beautiful, is a beautiful thing:) thank you so much for your support and comment!

Heidi Sands May 26, 2018 at 12:05 PM Very nice Kale :) Kale Brereton May 27, 2018 at 10:33 AM thank you so much for the support! it means a lot coming from such a talented writer such as yourself!