Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

The Beauty of Women- Continued

Well it was another one of those days
Where the devil had come about
I was trying to write about the beauty of women
And the words just came right out

What I was trying to say was their all beautiful to me
And most men that I know would be sure to agree
But the words that I wrote that flew out so free
May have started a hate for me that I shall soon see

Now I'll spend my days all alone,and affraid to leave this house
For a woman might sneak up and try to strangle me with her blouse
I should have never wrote those words because I'm a spouse
And now my wife probably thinks I'm nothin more than a louse

But what I was trying to say was somethin most men will all agree
You don't need to always compare yourselves for it's something we all see
Your shoes,your clothes,your hair,your nails, it  all just drives us so crazy
You all have your own beautiful look so please accept it and just let it be

I never meant to degrade you in anyway or to cause you any alarm
But the hits those words received seems like I may be heading for some harm
So I ask for your forgiveness and please don't send out your women of arms
Because I told the men in my neighborhood,and their quite handy with their charms



DannyBoy 1-17-13

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Poet Destroyer A February 14, 2013 at 9:20 PM Dan , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .

Cecilia Macfarlane January 23, 2013 at 4:45 PM I can just picture hoards of women chasing you with their blouses....funny and entertaining write Dan! Hugs

Terry O'Leary January 19, 2013 at 4:35 AM Dan, I told you..."fraught with danger" ... a whole string of women after you now... what a sensual way to die... Terry (good poem, though... perhaps suitable for an epitaph...)

Lucilla Carrillo January 18, 2013 at 8:21 PM Dan; don't worry. Whatever will be will be. God bless. Lucilla

Shaz Cheesman January 18, 2013 at 6:18 AM lol....funny funny man Dan man hehehe! - Shaz

Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2013 at 12:26 PM lol ....... I see a picture ... A whole army of angry women outside your door ..... Now it will be hard to be "Dannyboy" ....... lol. - oxox / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :) -> .... RUN! Dan Kearley January 17, 2013 at 12:34 PM Hahahahaha... :o0 I'm peeking out my windows! I know they are out there!...Hahaha At least I still got oxox from you. :o) f.e.f