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The Beauty of Women

Women are a thing of beauty Created by God for man From their different hips,to their lushes lips Or the gentle touch of their hand They all have a way about them That I've noticed throughout the years They have tender hearts,and precious smiles With beautiful eyes that sparkle,when filled with tears But they constantly look at other women Though none will tell you that it's true From their styles of hair,to the clothes they ware It's a hidden secret that they all do Some will say that I'm wrong As they claim,"Hey that's not me" But I'm a man who has watched for many years And am now exposing the secret that I've seen Some of them are concerned about their weight Or possibly the droopiness of their breasts Or the stretch marks that may have appeared some where Along with menopause,PMS,and all the rest All I can say is we are men Who don't really notice most of those things You are all beautiful in your own special ways And you will always be a part of our dreams
DannyBoy:1-16-13 © Ha,ha.. :oP

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/23/2013 4:39:00 PM
Great insight DannyBoy....you made me smile. Hugs
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Date: 1/18/2013 8:17:00 PM
WOW! I give you a 7 for yhis one. you are a man of character and expirence. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 1/18/2013 6:16:00 AM
You hit the nail right on the head and dead centre Dan.......gr8 poem and love the message to all women at the end......men dont car so much about the shallow things :D mwah - Shaz
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Date: 1/17/2013 5:37:00 PM
Very sweet poem and very true. Awesome one!! :D:D:D Always, Laura
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Date: 1/17/2013 2:36:00 AM
When you get old and lightheaded still turns around to look at the ladies .... you forgot why?? (watch while you're young) ..... nice poem f.e.f. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/16/2013 6:33:00 PM
beauty is a gift of Gods. it is not eternal nor is it ment to be. we hope that the word beauty turns to momma. well writen.
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Date: 1/16/2013 5:00:00 PM
Great poem Dan, but boy I'd be careful with this one (it is funny, though, funny and fraught with danger...) Terry
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