Dan Kearley Poet Rhyme

The Beauty of Women

Women are a thing of beauty
Created by God for man
From their different hips,to their lushes lips
Or the gentle touch of their hand
 
They all have a way about them
That I've noticed throughout the years
They have tender hearts,and precious smiles
With beautiful eyes that sparkle,when filled with tears
 
But they constantly look at other women
Though none will tell you that it's true
From their styles of hair,to the clothes they ware
It's a hidden secret that they all do
 
Some will say that I'm wrong
As they claim,"Hey that's not me"
But I'm a man who has watched for many years
And am now exposing the secret that I've seen
 
Some of them are concerned about their weight
Or possibly the droopiness of their breasts
Or the stretch marks that may have appeared some where
Along with menopause,PMS,and all the rest
 
All I can say is we are men
Who don't really notice most of those things
You are all beautiful in your own special ways
And you will always be a part of our dreams
 
DannyBoy:1-16-13 ©
Ha,ha..  :oP

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Cecilia Macfarlane January 23, 2013 at 4:39 PM Great insight DannyBoy....you made me smile. Hugs

Lucilla Carrillo January 18, 2013 at 8:17 PM WOW! I give you a 7 for yhis one. you are a man of character and expirence. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Shaz Cheesman January 18, 2013 at 6:16 AM You hit the nail right on the head and dead centre Dan.......gr8 poem and love the message to all women at the end......men dont car so much about the shallow things :D mwah - Shaz

Laura Breidenthal January 17, 2013 at 5:37 PM Very sweet poem and very true. Awesome one!! :D:D:D Always, Laura

Anne-Lise Andresen January 17, 2013 at 2:36 AM When you get old and lightheaded still turns around to look at the ladies .... you forgot why?? (watch while you're young) ..... nice poem f.e.f. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

The Situation January 16, 2013 at 6:33 PM beauty is a gift of Gods. it is not eternal nor is it ment to be. we hope that the word beauty turns to momma. well writen.

Terry O'Leary January 16, 2013 at 5:00 PM Great poem Dan, but boy I'd be careful with this one (it is funny, though, funny and fraught with danger...) Terry