The Beauty of the Mountains

the mountains from an open window
From my window, I see galore... at the splendor of the enormous mountain of the Kanchendjunga he seems to return me a welcoming glance, which tells me of the wondrous beauty of the hidden world that he protects.. It tells me of the contact of mankind he evades, and of the many a weary soul lost in his tread and the cold disdain mountainous terrain over his head.... he chooses his solitude and his strength, while leaving behind a lone cold fearsome shadow of dread........ He is the mountain of wondrous dread and a layer of snow over his head.....
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Date: 9/27/2013 2:06:00 AM
Coming back many days later on Psoup!
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Date: 7/18/2013 10:36:00 PM
Neil, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT
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Neil Tuneer
Date: 7/22/2013 7:54:00 AM
thanks!!
Date: 7/14/2013 11:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win. my friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/14/2013 1:45:00 AM
that last line is so awesome. Congrats on your win. I live right up next to Utah mountains and can relate to this.
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Date: 7/14/2013 12:05:00 AM
Stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA
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Neil Tuneer
Date: 7/22/2013 7:54:00 AM
thank you!
Date: 7/10/2013 8:40:00 AM
Hi Neil, I know I read this poem, and left a comment,,, however -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:09:00 PM
Splendid, Neil , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Neil Tuneer
Date: 7/10/2013 7:18:00 AM
thanks!! SKAT , i would love to be your friend. -NEIL
Date: 7/9/2013 12:03:00 PM
- Hi Neil, a lovely poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Neil Tuneer
Date: 7/10/2013 8:20:00 AM
Maam! i am really sorry! the mistake in my earlier reply is deeply regretted!!!! -NEIL-thepoetwithin
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Neil Tuneer
Date: 7/10/2013 7:22:00 AM
thank you sir!! I am honored deeply! to get a reply from such a wonderful poet!
Date: 7/9/2013 9:57:00 AM
Personifying mountains is done nicely. Wish you nice day and well come to the P.S. Carry on and on.... Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/9/2013 9:26:00 AM
now this is deep beauty... deep, like snow... welcome to the soup...LINDA
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Date: 7/9/2013 7:50:00 AM
Wonderful description of the majestic mountains. Well done and Welcome to P/Soup
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Neil Tuneer
Date: 7/9/2013 8:02:00 AM
I have joined just half an hour ago! Thanks for your comment!
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