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The Beauty of Subtleties

the beauty of subtleties there are one thousand shades of grey each separate and distinct across this desert month. low gravid clouds puffed, like the breasts of flocking doves touch the earth transforming to pearlescent, pale white gauze caught in reaching branches. steely water on the bay, life sheltered far below, rolls smooth as oil swells dappled with foam. ancient almost-dust leaves kick up on my boot toe as I scuffle through the wood between beach and silver birch. an owls lonely cry echoes as it brushes by overhead softsilent perhaps hunting field mice or rabbits November is gentle in its iron frosts. calm, still, as though waiting a canvas barely sketched upon.

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Date: 11/16/2017 4:00:00 PM
This is so true!
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/16/2017 4:54:00 PM
Thank you it is the time of the year again. I am in the warms of the cottage watching as always.
Date: 10/27/2017 8:22:00 PM
As I read this poem, I feltthat I was there experiencing all the action in this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 11/16/2017 4:56:00 PM
That gives me great encouragemeant because it is my goal to draw the reader into the experience. Thank you.
Date: 9/29/2017 7:51:00 PM
I am truly in awe of this creation my friend! The depth, enormity of thought this piece brings is astounding!! A fav...
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/29/2017 8:07:00 PM
Thank you Robert now are you?
Date: 9/29/2017 5:09:00 PM
Gorgeous.
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/29/2017 5:34:00 PM
thank you.
Date: 9/29/2017 1:53:00 PM
Stunning piece Patricia xomo
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/29/2017 2:19:00 PM
Thanks sweet friend.
Date: 9/29/2017 1:50:00 PM
This is truly wonderful poetry, Patricia...reminds me ever so much as Dylan Thomas. I would say this ranks amongst the finest, if not the very best, of your excellent poems -- beautifully penned!! :) john
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 9/29/2017 2:27:00 PM
Oh you hit a spot then, Dylan Thomas is my most favourite poet of all, ever. I am honoured that you put us in the same sentence. Thank you.

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