The Beauty of Subtleties

the beauty of subtleties

there are one thousand shades of grey
each separate and distinct
across this desert month.

low gravid clouds puffed,
like the breasts of flocking doves
touch the earth transforming 
to pearlescent, pale white gauze
caught in reaching branches.

steely water on the bay,
life sheltered far below,
rolls smooth as oil swells
dappled with foam.

ancient almost-dust leaves 
kick up on my boot toe
as I scuffle through the wood
between beach and silver birch.

an owls lonely cry echoes
as it brushes by overhead
softsilent perhaps hunting
field mice or rabbits

November is gentle 
in its iron frosts.   calm, still, 
as though waiting
a canvas barely sketched upon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gist Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 4:00 PM
This is so true!
Cresswell Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 4:54 PM
Thank you it is the time of the year again. I am in the warms of the cottage watching as always.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 27, 2017 at 8:22 PM
As I read this poem, I feltthat I was there experiencing all the action in this poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
Cresswell Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 4:56 PM
That gives me great encouragemeant because it is my goal to draw the reader into the experience. Thank you.
Lindley Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 7:51 PM
I am truly in awe of this creation my friend! The depth, enormity of thought this piece brings is astounding!! A fav...
Cresswell Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 8:07 PM
Thank you Robert now are you?
Cozart Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 5:09 PM
Gorgeous.
Cresswell Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 5:34 PM
thank you.
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September 29, 2017 at 1:53 PM
Stunning piece Patricia xomo
Cresswell Avatar
September 29, 2017 at 2:19 PM
Thanks sweet friend.
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September 29, 2017 at 1:50 PM
This is truly wonderful poetry, Patricia...reminds me ever so much as Dylan Thomas. I would say this ranks amongst the finest, if not the very best, of your excellent poems -- beautifully penned!! :) john
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September 29, 2017 at 2:27 PM
Oh you hit a spot then, Dylan Thomas is my most favourite poet of all, ever. I am honoured that you put us in the same sentence. Thank you.
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