The Beauty of Nature

Author Note: I am not sure this is what you are looking for, I find it difficult to write about 
nature without including all the related elements to the theme. If if does not qualify, well, can 
you blame a guy for trying?


As I crested the knoll of the hill, 
I looked down upon a valley 
plush and rich in all shade of
rainbow coloration. 

Twisted trees nestled among 
trunks straight and true; 
give ancient clues  
to violent upheaval 
from sometime past, 
now serene and at peace 
with nature. 

Grasses displaying varying degree of deep green, 
with wide blades of variable length and breadth, 
are accented by variegated ferns and vines, 
draped majestically around trunks, 
threading through tree branches; 
does pale in comparison 
to the explosion of color 
extending to the horizon.

A carpet of wild flowers producing 
visual overload 
and sensory stimulation of aromas, 
indescribable, imprinted deep within the mind, 
to be fondly reminisced another day. 

Doe with spotted yearling 
feast on this delectable bounty, 
while a stag, nearby, stands guard;
rabbits contentedly rest 
among long stems 
supporting broad leaves 
to shade and comfort. 

In the distant, 
a mountain peak 
reminds of the harshness 
that exists above the level of this valley  
to be subjected upon all who enter its 
realm of ice, snow, and extreme cold, 
yet, in all its fierceness, 
a trickle of life sustaining water ebbs 
from melting peak, 
to meander through the valley  
satisfying all inhabitants, 
large and small. 

A wolf and his mate 
stalk the outer reaches of the valley, 
beautiful for all their size and strength, 
fulfill their role in natures plan, 
cause none sustained duress, 
help maintain a balance  
beneficial to all in this valley of life. 

No footprint of man exists 
or will ever be found, 
he may look upon this valley ,
from this hill, 
but cannot enter this realm, 
this place enjoyed 
by only those who can see, 
the beauty of nature  
as it was meant to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 1/29/2010 7:44:00 PM
I echo Charma,EXCELLENT work, and yes, I Think it met the criteria perfectly. Luv, andrea
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Date: 1/29/2010 1:08:00 PM
EXCELLENT WORK...Charma
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Date: 1/29/2010 11:47:00 AM
What a lovely word picture. I hope man never destroys this wonderful work of nNature. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/29/2010 7:09:00 AM
enjoyed reading today. keep sharing
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Date: 1/29/2010 4:26:00 AM
This contest is going to be real tough i can tell. a great one Mac. good luck in the contest
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Date: 1/28/2010 9:39:00 PM
Magnificent images of the colorful wildflowers, Mac! Perhaps this valley is so beautiful because man cannot set foot there. I like the way you wove the other elements of nature and a message into your entry. Best of luck to you! Love, Carolyn
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