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The Beauty of Gifted Poetry

There are only so many poems you can read Then your heart just starts to bleed Because you still have that burning need You're trying so hard your soul to feed Your husband is so far away Your night is longer than your day You wonder if God can hear you pray Or if always alone you’re meant to stay The words just do not come out right You dread the long and lonely night The joy in your life has turned to blight Your choice? To die or to take flight Then healing words appear on your screen… That wash your heart and make you clean You feel like to heaven you have been A angel's ministration you have seen That’s the charm of gifted poetry Makes you live sheer ecstasy Wipes from your heart the drudgery Makes you taste eternity! Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/6/2013 9:04:00 AM
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Date: 3/15/2013 8:42:00 AM
Eileen; This is just beautiful and very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/17/2013 1:10:00 PM
Lucilla...glad you enjoyed it. :) Hope you are doing well!
Date: 3/14/2013 4:50:00 PM
Oh, the agony Auntie lol, you captured this perfectly, another great write from you. Regards Richard
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/17/2013 1:10:00 PM
;) Thanks, Richard...As your agony Aunt, is there any advice I can give? ;) Thanks for following my work!
Date: 3/14/2013 4:32:00 AM
well said, Eileen!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2013 4:33:00 AM
Thanks, James! Kind of you! :)
Date: 3/13/2013 7:00:00 PM
sounds like you have the gift
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2013 12:54:00 AM
That's lovely of you to say! Thank you!
Date: 3/13/2013 6:40:00 PM
So true, i think you have a winner here ;) Thanks for stopping by my verse. Light & Love
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2013 12:55:00 AM
Thanks, Debbie. That means a lot to me. I'm not entering it to any competition, but to know it's a winner in your books is quite a compliment for me! :) Hugs!
Date: 3/13/2013 5:51:00 PM
Some words are healing...wonderful Eileen
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2013 12:56:00 AM
Yes, Donna...and they way we are...a mass of broken humanity...healing is in great demand. Hugs to you, my dear.
Date: 3/13/2013 4:25:00 PM
So glad I found you Eileen. Love this poem, particularly the theme & rhyming scheme...Sweeter than honey, (Honey:) Cheerios, Terry
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2013 12:57:00 AM
Honey Cheerios! Yummy yummy for my tummy! ;) Thanks for the lovely post! It made my day! I will be visiting you soon! :) Hugs
Date: 3/13/2013 4:16:00 PM
yes, poetry can have that effect. you just have to find those magical ones...
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Date: 3/13/2013 3:43:00 PM
This is such a truthful and delightfully amazing write my friend! I am enthralled by your tremendous poem that you have written so eloquently! What a dynamic piece, so very wondrous, Great Work!!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2013 12:51:00 AM
Russell...thanks ever so much for your kind comment. :) It is a gives me a great boost. :) Hope life is smiling at you right now. Hugs
Date: 3/13/2013 2:16:00 PM
Beautiful! I do love the taste of eternity.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/14/2013 12:50:00 AM
Thanks, Richard...so do I! :) It happens now and then when everything is just so perfect...so beautiful...so exhilarating that you think...how can it get any better than this? But it can....we just have to wait and see.

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