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The Beauty of Fall

With Autumn colors, Foliage withers off the trees, As birds migrate south. _______________ For Abe's Contest Haiku Seasons.

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/4/2009 7:13:00 PM

Congratulations for your honorable mention in Abe's Haiku Season's contest. Love, Dane

Brandee Augustus

Date: 5/1/2009 1:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Date: 5/1/2009 12:11:00 PM

Nice use of imagery in this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the haiku contest. Keep on writing! Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/1/2009 6:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your placing in Abe's contest, Tyler! ~ Carrie

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/30/2009 11:57:00 PM

Congrats with you HM Tyler, lovely scene...Raul

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/30/2009 11:33:00 PM

Such a peaceful write. Congratulations on the honorable mention. Smiles from Lolita

Jim Wilson

Date: 4/28/2009 11:46:00 AM

I like the plainness of this haiku. It's very understated and has the feeling of a good landscape painting.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/28/2009 10:29:00 AM

Good luck in the contest and nice imagery use. You describe the features of fall nicely...Raul