The Beauty of Fall

With Autumn colors,
Foliage withers off the trees,
As birds migrate south.




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For Abe's Contest
Haiku Seasons.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 7:13 PM
Congratulations for your honorable mention in Abe's Haiku Season's contest. Love, Dane
Augustus Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 1:34 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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May 1, 2009 at 12:11 PM
Nice use of imagery in this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the haiku contest. Keep on writing! Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
Richards Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations on your placing in Abe's contest, Tyler! ~ Carrie
Moreno Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 11:57 PM
Congrats with you HM Tyler, lovely scene...Raul
Townsend Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 11:33 PM
Such a peaceful write. Congratulations on the honorable mention. Smiles from Lolita
Wilson Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 11:46 AM
I like the plainness of this haiku. It's very understated and has the feeling of a good landscape painting.
Moreno Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 10:29 AM
Good luck in the contest and nice imagery use. You describe the features of fall nicely...Raul
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