The Beauty of Dawn

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Poetry/Imagism/the beauty of dawn
Copyright Protected, 06-1557-100-22
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

I love sweet morning melodies and a wild stream bubbling along horses grazing in a meadow and a forest echoing my name the murmur of leaves rustling and the hum of bees oh, the flutter of butterflies the choir of birds singing and I love the whistling wind the soothing calm it brings the placid yellow of buttercups and clouds that sail silently I breathe in the mystery of nature and sigh as a bird prunes a wing oh, my heart is awed with the beauty of this day as each dawn is a new beginning where I can put the past away give it to the dawn Poetry/Imagism/the beauty of dawn Copyright Protected, 06-1557-100-22 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

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John Loving Iii

Date: 6/23/2023 4:14:00 PM

Beautiful imagery.

Constance La France
Date: 6/23/2023 5:04:00 PM

John, thank you so much for the compliment !

Stephan McBride

Date: 6/22/2023 2:14:00 PM

What a peaceful beautiful scene you have given us to escape to : ). My brother is raising honey bees now , very amazing bees in the way they work together to achieve their goal, I still remember the picture with your mom and her horse, : )

Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2023 3:47:00 PM

Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment, yes, we must protect the bees, I treasure that picture of my mom and her horse, the love of horses was something we both shared, I have picture of me and my horse about the same age !

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/22/2023 1:01:00 PM

The mysterious beauty of nature set in a scene of calm serenity Constance. I too love morning's loveliness. Best wishes and blessings for the contest!

Constance La France
Date: 6/22/2023 3:48:00 PM

Sam, thank you so much for the compliment, I love the dawn, there is nothing more beautiful !