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The Beautiful Midnight Sky

Entry for Write Eight Beautiful Lines Poetry contest Constance La France I walked through the curtain of darkness in the middle of a quiet, beautiful, night Stars sparkled above, in every direction Like a fairy, my soul took flight Home sweet home, people slept, I flew enjoying all the freedom in mind It has been a very long journey, to reach this place where I unwind Heidi Sands (C)opyright Placed 3rd.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/3/2025 6:08:00 AM

Hello Heidi. This is a delightful write. Congratulations! :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/3/2025 6:15:00 AM

Thank you Linda :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/2/2025 2:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win. I love your write. The trip is now over. Hooray!!! Hugs... Have a blessed day with your win................

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/2/2025 3:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Paula. Yes. I hope you have a blessed day too. Hugs :)

Terry Miller

Date: 3/31/2025 3:04:00 AM

Excellent poem for this contes, congratulations

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/2/2025 3:28:00 PM

Thank you Terry :)

thriveni c mysore

Date: 3/31/2025 12:22:00 AM

Sure it is beautiful place dear poet. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/2/2025 3:28:00 PM

Thank you very much :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/27/2025 2:52:00 AM

Excellent poem Heidi. A good contender for a win.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/27/2025 5:05:00 AM

Thank you very much Victor. I hope you have a nice day :)

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 3/26/2025 1:38:00 PM

Beautiful Heidi and the imagery is excellent

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2025 1:47:00 PM

Thank you Oliver. I appreciate your kind comment :)

Ink Empress

Date: 3/26/2025 9:13:00 AM

So beautiful and so very well articulated stunning lines painting imagery in such a creative manner dear heidi! I love the opening lines the most and the ending too which feels like much needed peace. Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2025 1:47:00 PM

Thank you very much, Ink :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/26/2025 8:47:00 AM

- Now you can see life through a thin lace curtain, lovely for the contest, Heidi :) - I have posted my entry today :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/26/2025 1:46:00 PM

Thank you very much. Best wishes to you too Anne-Lise . Hugs :)