The Beautiful Melt

All those sentimental Christmas songs with romantic pretty lines like "Walking in a Winter Wonderland" or "As Long as you love me so, let it snow let it snow, let it snow" - I'd love to take the feeling of nostalgia each lovely phrase invokes and wrap it around me like a warm woolen cloak. But words do not suffice, and imagination, no matter how sweet, will not see me through a long cold winter's night. I look up at a sky ablaze with stars. They cannot match the light within your shining eyes. I want to BE with you, snuggled by a fire, the steady glow of your adoring eyes on mine; the touch of your fingers on my face; and the touch of my own fingers, trembling, as I trace your smile before you lean in for the softest, smoothest kiss. Oh, for the beautiful melt of the season as the warmth of REAL sensations soak into my skin. No, a mere fond memory simply cannot do! N/A on July 7/18 in the Mid-Season Premier Contest any theme, any form, max of 25 lines Now used for Janice Canerdy's 'Any Poem That Got NA'd in June-July 2017' Poetry Contest
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Ashley Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 9:04 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your win! Your poem is beautiful with a sensuous twist :)
Canerdy Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 10:40 PM
Andrea, thank you for entering my contest, CONGRATULATIONS on your win. Janice
Jordan Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 11:21 PM
Congratulations on the big win. I love the poem. Very sensual... Jack
Ryerson Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 8:17 AM
Well Andrea, you've done it again...Somehow I seem to have missed or overlooked your romantic and even erotic side!...I especially love the part where you'd like to take the nostalgia of the Christmas carols and wrap them around you like a warm cloak...Congrats my dear friend - Tim
Liwayway Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 2:26 AM
Fantastic write!! creatively written poem friend Andrea..It deserved #1...Big congratulations on your grand win!! Hugs :)
Smith Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 9:57 PM
Just a Great write. Congrats on a well earned #1 win Russell
Seal Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 6:49 PM
Beautifully romantic poem Petal, Congratulations... again :) Take care, Richard
Macfarlane Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 1:21 PM
Andrea, a dreamy write about waiting for your dreamboat to come home. So beautiful! Hugs
Devnath  Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 10:36 AM
Congrats on your superb win in the contest. An excellent poem of excellent words. Loved always, bl
May Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 7:00 AM
congrats on a great win Andrea
Undertaker Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 5:39 AM
great! congrats on your win.
Onclaud Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 4:14 AM
a light-hearted, lovely piece that makes me want to feel the xmas spiriit, andie.. congrats!..SOUP MAIL!
Mannan Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 10:46 PM
Oh this is beautiful and a deserving win. Many congrats Andrea.
Patnaik Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 8:00 PM
Congratulations !...This poem is simply outstanding from beginning till the end. I enjoyed reading each line.
A   Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 7:41 PM
an awesome win. always & forever *LINDA
A  Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 6:52 PM
Thank you Andrea, congratulations, glad you decided to enter this free verse in my contest. :-) love ~ SKAT~
A   Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 12:59 PM
Andrea , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for everything...pd
Lamoureux Avatar
December 16, 2012 at 1:01 PM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Thanks so much for the time you took to read my poems. I greatly appreciate the time and comments. Have a wonderful Christmas Andrea.
Goodwin Avatar
December 14, 2012 at 11:27 PM
So very romantic. Wonderful write. -- Sean
Liwayway Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 10:58 AM
outstanding poem my friend Andrea...super like it!! congratulations on your win. Hugs, Maria
Babcock Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 7:46 PM
Hmmmm a sexy hot write Andrea. Congrats on your win with this gem. love phyl
Sweetheart Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 6:47 AM
congrats Andrea on an outstanding write and exciting win for fond memories .. this is exceptional luv ..
Arowolo Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 6:33 AM
Congratulations on your big win in this contest,Andrea....Lovely write,friend...
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 8, 2012 at 5:49 AM
Big Congratulations Andy love, would have placed it higher sweetie xx
Ober Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 9:45 PM
Big congratulations!!! The title is absolutely perfect, and the poem itself gave me the warm fuzzies :)
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