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The Beating of the Mill

The beating of the Mill, we hear it down the hill. It is the town's heartbeat. No children on the street already in the shop to labor till they drop. Sold to the upper class; the mother needs the brass. The father on the beer; not working since last year. The bosses own their soul, their houses, so they toll; boy, sister, young as four stay bailiff from the door. They; hardly off the teat, meet quotas, or get beat. Most dying all too young from ailment of the lung or bodies ripped apart. No healthcare; caring heart so poorer lose their health while richer gain more wealth on broken bodies, pain. The workers take the strain. Not distant, in the past but present, and to last. You think that things have changed, you all must be deranged; The Beating of the Mill is calling us all still! The Sweat Shop Poetry Contest placed 5th Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann Date wrote: 15th February 2022

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Date: 4/1/2022 10:34:00 PM
So sad "Sold, to the upper class; the mother needs the brass. The father on the beer; not working since last year." and yet often so true! I like that you said so much in rhyme.
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/2/2022 6:01:00 AM
Thank you Caren I was trying to work with a strong beat in this one.
Date: 2/16/2022 8:29:00 PM
Ooh! Excellent perspective, past and present, Terry. Elites think that the days of 'the mill' are long gone... Same elites that mocked Vladimir Putin as a 19th-century laughingstock. (Who's laughing now?!) :) gw
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Terry Miller
Date: 2/21/2022 1:29:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon, I appreciate your comments and your encouraging visits. Terry.
Date: 2/15/2022 8:21:00 AM
A great poem with a very powerful 'sweat shop' message and great cadence. Nice one Terry. Cheers - Gary
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Terry Miller
Date: 2/16/2022 1:18:00 AM
Thank you, Gary; I was trying for that rhythmic beating mill cadence throughout; I appreciate your comments, Terry.
Date: 2/15/2022 3:53:00 AM
Hey Terry…..great poem really liked it! Debx
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Terry Miller
Date: 2/16/2022 1:19:00 AM
Thank you, Deb.
Date: 2/15/2022 3:49:00 AM
..."Saint Peter don't you call me cause I can't go, I owe my soul to the company store" I think that's a line from a Tennessee Ernie Ford song
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Terry Miller
Date: 2/16/2022 1:20:00 AM
Indeed! Thanks for visiting, Terry.

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