'the Beating of Hearts'

We could pretend it’s the end, start loving each other all over again I know you want to, you still look at me in that way as if to say, "I want to make you mine" I knew that day I've lost it, could not control the beating of my heart they say a woman's heart beats faster than a man's that first night I couldn't tell the difference it was like your heart knew mine needed yours the music it made, had me floating all I could think of was how handsome you looked still don’t fathom, you thinking I had this to die for smile I just knew you held me captive, chemistry never played a part we were just two parts of a puzzle connecting, completing in the end answering all the questions my heart once asked now here we are, it's been a while yet it still feels like it’s that first time when I realized without question, you are the beating of my heart
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Date: 2/27/2022 10:36:00 PM
Fabulous! A throwback from yesteryears, I see. So happy to see this featured
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Date: 10/1/2012 4:41:00 PM
Oh mercy me Wilma!...here you go again! All apologies to the judge but...why the heck didn't this place first?...Exquisite...Tim
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Date: 9/30/2012 2:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gail Doyle's "My Endless Love" contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 8:29:00 AM
Love thse last two lines Wilma they round of an awesome poem . Congratulations xx
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Date: 9/30/2012 3:49:00 AM
SUPER CONGRATS WILMA ON A STUNNING WRITE AND STELLAR WIN MY FRIEND SHARING ENDLESS LUV .. WE R BACK TO BRISK DAYS AND COOL NIGHTS IN 50'S .. BYE BYE BEACH FORNOTHER SEASON ..BUT WE R ENJOYING OUR NEW GRANDSON BORN LAST WEEK SO DON'T MIND BEING INDOORS .. WHAT'S UP WITH U?
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Date: 9/29/2012 4:13:00 PM
Sincere and emotional. Congratulations on your win. Nice to find you here Wilma. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/22/2012 1:40:00 PM
Amazing piece from a hear made of love and a soul soaked in tallent and beauty.. so much love this poem.. in my favs it goes CTH.... love and hugs forever from ME....xooxo
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Date: 9/20/2012 9:19:00 PM
breathtaking lines as only sweet Wilma can create to excite the readers .. so deep .. so intoxicating .. I think Ron and I feel we r each others breath and heart beat .. so my friend u hit a bulls eye with this gorgeous pieve ..
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Date: 9/18/2012 6:18:00 PM
so well put Wilma. A succesful poem is that which aptly describes one's feelings and thought and circumstance. Pbviously this is one of those. Lovely
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Date: 9/18/2012 4:48:00 PM
Ah, you are a true romantic, Wilma! Gives the reader a nice feeling knowing your life is back on track. Reads like a fairy tale brought into reality a veritable prince charming and his sweet, lovely princess!! Keep well and stay happy! Mikki
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Date: 9/18/2012 9:10:00 AM
awww, what a lovely write, my friend. Hope you are having a great week lfde
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Date: 9/18/2012 7:02:00 AM
this is so cleverly written, Wilma, but i disagree with the form "light poetry" this is sensationally profound...!!!
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Date: 9/17/2012 10:18:00 PM
oooh la la, that last line. WOW. This is wonderful and romantic. A GREAT poem, Wilma.
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Date: 9/17/2012 5:35:00 PM
so sweet and romantic! an awesome write, Wilma. Congratulations for a well-done poem. I've enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing and for taking your time to read my work and your kind comments as well. Have a wonderful day always!!! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 9/17/2012 1:25:00 PM
Ohh...Wilma a great romantic poem from you !!Love this!
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Date: 9/17/2012 11:46:00 AM
yeow, wilms!...if the all the loving gets to be too much for you, please send the residue in my direction.. such a sensitive and heartfelt write; ' I just know you held me, captive '.. :) huggs
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Date: 9/17/2012 9:54:00 AM
nice write,,,,I like to read these kinds of poem ;}
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Date: 9/17/2012 6:36:00 AM
Ahhh, this is the sweetest, most tender write I've read in a long time my friend! I really love this poem very much Wilma! I thoroughly enjoyed this incredible write this morning! What a fully delightful poem a lovely little poem! Fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/17/2012 3:20:00 AM
So romantic and it surely will make some one's heart beat.
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