The Beast Within

The girl of my dreams
I met one night
Her beauty captured
This Highland Knight
 
Its been a month
And i am so absorbed
To be with her
On natures orb
 
Then one night 
As we lay in bed
A strange feeling
Runs through my head
 
The previous night
She stayed out late
Not getting home
As i lie awake
 
A pattern showed
On various nights
She never came home
Until near light
 
In wanting to know
One darkened night
In following her
Keeping out of site
 
Clearing ahead
Brightened sky
Was that a howl
Or a dogs cry
 
Shrubbery clearing
As my eyes did see
The girl of my dreams
Standing over me
 
Her white nightdress
Blackened and stained
Droplets of red
Unexplained
 
I reach out to touch
As she pulls away
Her body changing
In every way
 
Her long golden hair
Now grainy Gray
Her looks resembling
In a wolf-en way
 
Transformed in all
Into the night, she heads
The very next day
Deadened red
 
In sorrow torn
My heart decides
To rid this world
Of her wolf-en side
 
Gunsmith called
Silver required
Bullets made
Revolver acquired
 
The very next night
Shrubbery clearing
Quickened steps
Wolf-en nearing
 
Up i stand
As she growls at me
Her teeth bloodied
Saliva streams
 
In one massive leap
She makes for me
As i draw my gun
And fire three
 
In whimpering howl
To the ground she falls
Whimpering silenced
Her very last call
 
The girl of my dreams
I met one night
This changing beauty
I killed tonight



http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy2.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/31/2010 10:30:00 AM
i think this is really good i loved it :)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2009 3:04:00 AM
caroline and i are friends,we are different women with different Robin HOODS;-)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/17/2009 8:12:00 PM
Creative piece here James that your pen mastered so cleverly! What could you do? It was kill or be killed!! Excellent!!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/17/2009 7:45:00 PM
Whew! What a tale you have told in this poem! I like the way your story twists as it unfolds the truth. Very suspenseful! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 7/17/2009 5:42:00 PM
James, you are so full of surprises..Maybe it was something you ate. Wonderful. BG
Login to Reply
Date: 7/17/2009 3:58:00 PM
this is original,different--killing getting rid of the woman in your dreams after following her paths in strange hours--romance passion and mystery,this goes to my favs--original--charma
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter