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The Beast

Deeply buried lies the beast Masked by smiles and quiet peace Can’t explain, don’t want to say Sometimes alone I quietly pray I sob and sob, the uncontrollable shake Oh my God, please crush this beast No one sees the pain I suffer quietly Keep this beast within It’s my burden alone You will see my smiles See my quietness Deep within, my battle rages, Sadness engrained, my losses deep, My soul forever etched with the warriors I’ve served

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/29/2017 10:59:00 AM
What a great poem. Welcome to poetry soup
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Date: 7/23/2017 6:17:00 AM
If you share your burden with God, He will help you to carry it, Paul.
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Date: 7/19/2017 3:01:00 AM
It's a good metaphor, using The Beast for what lives within. Very relatable too unfortunately.... Welcome to PoetrySoup
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Paul Biecker
Date: 7/19/2017 5:53:00 AM
Thank you for welcoming me to PoetrySoup!

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