The Beacon of Hope Premiere Contest Winner

When you dread the break of day
and wait with the bated breath
the dawn of dusk 
for an eerie peace to descent,
When the balmy twilight 
singes your soul and you yearn  
for the welcoming arms of darkness,
When you begin to walk
and lose all sense of direction
but are too far down the road 
to turn back,
When you turn to your friends
and find none to comfort you,
When the concept of an all pervading God
dissipates like the morning mist
besetting you with doubts and fear;

Then in the midst of a looming storm,
death appears like a beacon of hope
beckoning your weary soul ashore.


~04/20/2017 / Words count: 111
~Free Verse contest by Laura Loo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/24/2017 8:05:00 AM
Well done Abdul, congratulations...
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Date: 2/24/2017 5:22:00 AM
Congrats, Abdul!
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Date: 2/24/2017 3:21:00 AM
Congratulations Abdul on a fine win:)
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Date: 2/23/2017 9:27:00 PM
Wow Abdul nice write! Congrats on a fine win!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/23/2017 9:45:00 PM
Thanks John. Appreciate a lot.
Date: 2/23/2017 9:19:00 PM
Abdul, congratulations! Powerful, inspired writing - the reader is drawn inexorably on.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/23/2017 9:44:00 PM
Appreciate your comment. Thanks Doug.
Date: 2/23/2017 8:54:00 PM
Just beautiful Abdul..made my soul shine and my heart smile :) thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/23/2017 9:44:00 PM
Glad you liked it. Thanks a lot.
Date: 4/27/2014 4:25:00 AM
Abdul, ... Congratulations. Thank you for the support. XOX~ Linda
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