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The Beacon of Hope Premiere Contest Winner

When you dread the break of day and wait with the bated breath the dawn of dusk for an eerie peace to descent, When the balmy twilight singes your soul and you yearn for the welcoming arms of darkness, When you begin to walk and lose all sense of direction but are too far down the road to turn back, When you turn to your friends and find none to comfort you, When the concept of an all pervading God dissipates like the morning mist besetting you with doubts and fear; Then in the midst of a looming storm, death appears like a beacon of hope beckoning your weary soul ashore. ~04/20/2017 / Words count: 111 ~Free Verse contest by Laura Loo

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Date: 2/24/2017 8:05:00 AM
Well done Abdul, congratulations...
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Date: 2/24/2017 5:22:00 AM
Congrats, Abdul!
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Date: 2/24/2017 3:21:00 AM
Congratulations Abdul on a fine win:)
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Date: 2/23/2017 9:27:00 PM
Wow Abdul nice write! Congrats on a fine win!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/23/2017 9:45:00 PM
Thanks John. Appreciate a lot.
Date: 2/23/2017 9:19:00 PM
Abdul, congratulations! Powerful, inspired writing - the reader is drawn inexorably on.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/23/2017 9:44:00 PM
Appreciate your comment. Thanks Doug.
Date: 2/23/2017 8:54:00 PM
Just beautiful Abdul..made my soul shine and my heart smile :) thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Abdul Malik
Date: 2/23/2017 9:44:00 PM
Glad you liked it. Thanks a lot.
Date: 4/27/2014 4:25:00 AM
Abdul, ... Congratulations. Thank you for the support. XOX~ Linda
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