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The Battle Within

There are two soldiers inside of me.
Fighting a battle I can plainly see.

One is very bad, 
and that makes me sad.

One is pretty good,
and does as it should.

Who will win we will see,
For that battle is going on constantly.

Edward J. Ebbs - December 01, 2002
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Austin Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 1:54 PM
Good write on human nature. Congrats on the selection. daver
Brown Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ed. Love, Carol
Lane Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 11:22 AM
Luckily there is armor to wear. Tony
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