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The Battle

All I can hear is my breath, Feeling the touch of death. I ran as fast as I could, My head was covered by a hood. I burst into the nurse’s room, Now feeling as if I’m in a tomb. “Are you ok?” I leaned against the doorway, so I muttered something she couldn’t hear, “you will have to speak up dear.” “I think I’m having a panic attack.” Suddenly all I can see is black, I fall to the ground I know I hit the floor but I heard no sound. My hands clenched shut, Unable to get them unstuck. Not wanting to retreat, I dig in my feet. I sit and wait, And call this battle a stalemate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/8/2016 3:26:00 PM
I know that feeling, well described.
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Date: 4/8/2016 12:12:00 PM
Brennan, there seems to be different battles going on within our minds. Your description of a panic attack is realistic. Each is unique as created paintings. Thank you for sharing your insightful writing. ~ Sonia
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Date: 4/8/2016 9:45:00 AM
Brave and touching rhymes: breath and death; could and hood; hear and dear; ground and sound etc. Amassing feelings and means by communication with.I imagine the rhythm and verse like a walk with a pony in a park of flying colored leaves towards the leafage`s melancholy.
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