The Batted Ball

the batted ball
it flights toward the left field wall
we should attend its vector
inasmuch as it goes anywhere near Hector.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:34 AM
I agree this has a couplet kind of feeling. Thanks for the reply
A   Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 4:19 AM
Awesome
Mackay Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:33 AM
thank you...sometimes they flow.. more often, not!
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March 4, 2016 at 11:47 AM
Haha, I like! BG
Mackay Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 2:35 PM
thanks Barbara glad you liked
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