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written for the contest " in the stars" by The Rolling Stones, sponsored by Robert James Liguori! 

Premiere Contest WinnerThe Bath of Psyche, Frederic Leighton

You arouse the nascent
poetry of my trembling Psyche,
homing the heavy heart of
calm constellations
within this conscience,
teaching sleepless silence
between my sky and your river
to speak the lucent
          lexicon of languor ~

I felt you amidst unvoiced verses,
and   I   k i s s e d  the
music within your mind
from a plethora of petals away,
as the truth undressed me
to cleanse the confusion,
while hope embraces
the vulnerability
of being seen ~
the closing of the arms of gloaming
and the opening of the eyes of sunrise…

I breathe metaphors
into the mysterious mists of midnight,
embrace the beauty of darkness
that once drowned my spirit,
for I learned that healing
cares not for the heinous heat
of the Stygian sun,
burning the ink that feeds
the desire to dance
free from the faceless ghosts…

I am the rebloom of the light 
I feared
was   l o s  t  in the 
landscape of lament…
I choose to bathe
in the warm waters
of jasmine elegance,
sipping sultry star-beams
as my aura flowers ~
a cathartic sanctuary
where your pulse
becomes the life
that ebbs and flows
in sync with the sacred incarnate
of ripples reaching for the
soul beneath my soles ~
reminding me
of the rhythm of resilience,
to no longer allow
time to tear
the written chronicles
that even distance 
           couldn’t resist.

It’s in the stars; it’s our destiny.
So listen 
      ~ meteor magic ~ 
O dream-reviver ~
my passion, scripted;
the angels sing of you and me,
  lyrics of luck
       and love-laden lore…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Ray Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 4:06 PM
Anyone who can drag such beauty from the dark and hateful boundary separating the mortal world from the Greek underworld deserves such an honor....bravo, an excellent quill
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 7:04 PM
I choose to bathe in the warm waters of jasmine elegance, sipping sultry star-beams as my aura flowers…pretty! Congrats on your win!
Borg Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 2:40 PM
My feelings were right when I predicted a win for you, Empress. You've topped it all with a top win! Congratulations.
Smith  Avatar
September 7, 2026 at 3:22 AM
Back to congratulate you on podium win in the contest.
Sharma  Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 3:39 AM
Wonderfully you've woven this for the contest and I'm sure it will do brilliant! My fave is the last stanza.. "it's in the stars; it's our destiny" sighhh.. I wanna just print that and hang as a quote, how magical that is! The meteor magic! My faveeeeeee! And the last line.. I'm still starstruck by that.. "lyrics of luck and love-laden lore" goodnesszz you know it sounds ETHEREAL honestly.. 😯🥹😭 keep shining and writing my sweet poetic guardian angel! U da best, forever.. best of luck.. 💫💫 A FAVE ~
Sharma  Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 3:35 AM
Awwn this is so beautiful calming in the most ethereal way! I loveeeee the essence of love that you've depicted here, that's not filled with chaos rather ripples with a cosmic calm that only comes when hearts are connected unconditionally.. despite the odds.. your words made me feel so much, dear Ink, especially in these lines how you've written "burning the ink that feeds the desire to dance free from the faceless ghosts…" ah yes, I know those faceless fears all too well! " And that part " was l o s t in the landscape of lament… I choose to bathe in the warm waters of jasmine elegance, sipping sultry star-beams as my aura flowers ~" Ah how do I even describe! That's infinitely BREATHTAKING 🔥🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥
Onpaper Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 2:14 AM
I felt you amidst unvoiced verses, ayeeee papi I made sure u felt every ounce of me … I kissed the music within your mind … 👀 Ayee yaiyaaaa papi … u be ticketing me in unspeakable ways aeee.. I choose to bathe in the warm waters of jasmine elegance…. Yesss just like I choose to bathe in the warm embrace of your chimichangas 🔥🔥 where your pulse becomes the life that ebbs and flows… oooo talk these sexaaaay talks to me papi glorious piece of heaven !!! This piece is making my heart skip a thousand beats papi..
Wolf Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 8:21 PM
I sit here, bathing in the imagery, drinking it in thirstily -- until, overwhelmed, I drown in the drunkenness of satiation. Thank you, Empress. :) Gershon
Empress Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 9:33 PM
Awwn thank you so much GW. I love what youv said also in Toms comment, about me, so kind of you! I am really grateful for your thoughtfulness. Sending you light always 💫 🌙
Borg Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 6:49 PM
I feel a Premier Win coming your way with this one, Ink. If only The Stones could borrow some of your beautiful lines, they too might have a hit on their hands. Pleasure reading your lines as always.
Empress Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 9:53 PM
Awn thank you my dear Pascal! Haha about stones. I did listen to some of their songs. They were popular when I was a teen too. I hope Robert likes my take. I appreciate your kindness truly. Sending you light always ~ 💫 🌙
Gibbons Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 3:57 PM
Wow my dearest poetess Ink 🔥🔥 beautifully written from depth of your heart n soul. Your writing makes me feel whole and free and loved. My sweet inspirational gal of ink ✍️🌹🕊️✨ " it's the stars ~ our destiny " hmmm I'm listening intrigued by meteor magic ~ powerful Majestic ending " the angels sing of you lyrics of luck~ and love ~ laden lore " I'm breathless and gotta fav this ✍️hugzzzz forever friend boo 👻🧜‍♀️🦄🧜‍♀️🦄🧜‍♀️🦄✨️💋😘
Empress Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 9:55 PM
Awwwn Boo hah 👻 lolol I loveeee your faves! They always come with sweet emojis! I was reflecting ~ for the sake of my own inner sanity... You should see the artwork of this artist! You might like ~ Sending you light always 💫 🌙
Smith  Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 3:57 PM
This was pure joy to read with its metaphors and imagery flowing down the page.❤️
Empress Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 9:53 PM
Thank you so much dear Alison, I appreciate your kind support. Sending you light always 💫 🌙
Bordner Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 1:44 PM
Sometimes love must pulse low to reach peaks of true passion Poetess. This poem illustrates that truth...J.A.B.
Bordner Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 1:44 PM
Sometimes love must pulse low to reach peaks of true passion Poetess. This poem illustrates that truth...J.A.B.
Empress Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 9:57 PM
Can I ever argue with the Love therapist/guru? You know love, I know nothing, I just know how to love in extremes, my pulse ablaze! If ever the pulse drops, I know its time to move on from love illusion. I always speak my truth dear Justin ~ and you never fail to feel that truth. Sending you light always 💜 🌹
Cunningham Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 1:31 PM
Your pen is aflame IE, you've really gone in deep with this one. Stunning vocabulary and metaphors. I grew up listening to the stones. Good luck in the contest. Tom🌹
Cunningham Avatar
August 20, 2026 at 8:13 AM
She certainly is Gershon 👍
Empress Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 10:09 PM
Wow I love what youv said about my poetry dear Tom. And also GW what his response here says... sigh my heart is full! Thank you both so very much And I am grateful always for your kindness dear Tom Sending you light always ~ 💫 🌙
Wolf Avatar
August 19, 2026 at 8:24 PM
Tom: To think that Mick Jagger had a classical education which the Empress probably could only dream of. That's my guess. And look what each made of the hand that was dealt them: Jagger became a narcissistic pervert. The Empress, a beacon of light for every heartstring she pulls and soul she uplifts. We are blessed to have her on this site. Do we deserve her? I shudder to think. ~ Gershon
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