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The Bath

The Bath

Calmly, she cleanses
her body in my presence
before retiring,
manifesting her beauty
to kindle my interest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Summers Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 1:01 PM
Very nice, I like both the brevity and tone of the poem. John
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February 12, 2023 at 2:46 PM
Thank you, John, for your wonderful perspective and encouraging comment.
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