"the Bass"

There was a young man who loved fishing,
And left his young wife alone wishing-

     That a gentleman of class,
     would release her at last,

from the lips of the bass she'd been kissing!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 11:35 AM
ps Hey, you could even rhyme it and say "kishing" since it's not very fun for her. hahaha
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March 27, 2010 at 11:34 AM
REALLY good one, Bill. THat's how it's done! LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 10:03 AM
Funny way to start my day Bill.. so enjoyed reading your creative write..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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March 27, 2010 at 9:51 AM
Very clever, funny limerick, Bill. And here I was thinking I'd kissed too many frogs. Perhaps they were all just "bass" in disguise. (And I love fishing, too!) Love, Carolyn
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