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The Barn In My Rear View Mirror

Patchwork quilt of a metal roof, with a hip-shot lean to the left. Boards, weathered, to a storm cloud grey, with remnants of red in the cracks. Generations, hub of the farm. If only the old barn could talk. From its birth, in a barn raising, lumber from a family saw mill. Mares with foals, town dances and plows. Hay in the loft and moonshine. Sign of the times, acres were sold, but the old red barn is stubborn. It may be swaybacked in its spine, yet, its rugged beauty is ageless. For the contest: That Old Red Barn Host: Rick Parise Placement: 10th

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Date: 12/13/2010 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Paula in Rick's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/12/2010 6:43:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win Paula in Rick's fine contest >> James
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Date: 12/11/2010 7:15:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with this wonderful entry Paula
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Date: 12/11/2010 4:49:00 PM
this one is really cool, Paula!! Ageless beauty. GREAT. And congratulations.
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Date: 12/11/2010 9:52:00 AM
Generations, hub of the farm. If only the old barn could talk. Beautiful line Paula as is the whole poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/11/2010 6:08:00 AM
Congrats Paula on your big win in Rick's contest with this elegant write and win my friend.. enjoy another sweet success and victory with luv..
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Date: 12/11/2010 4:56:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Red Barn
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Date: 12/10/2010 11:26:00 PM
Indeed, these wonderful landmarks are ageless, Paula. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/9/2010 1:49:00 PM
Hi Paula.Such a simple topic and yet you write so beautifully,you give your poetry life.Good luck with this for the competition.Luv June(Sylvia)
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:22:00 AM
good one, I will have to check this contest out!! Rick has some good stuff!
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:20:00 AM
Very creative and interesting write on The Barn as rear view mirror, rugged beauty a nice image, Paula
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Date: 10/3/2010 10:30:00 PM
We all have a favorite barn! We had a neat old milking barn on our little hobby farm until a tornado two years ago. A sad day indeed! wayne
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