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Babble - to talk rapidly and continuously in a foolish, excited, or incomprehensible way.


“The fool doth think he is wise, but the wise man knows himself to be a fool.” ~William Shakespeare, As You Like It, Act V, Scene I
I weep by a stardust shore where the seraphs sing Tangerine tears rain despair 'neath a velveteen veil My melancholic muse, muslin-wrapped in ice-cold caskets Slain by ruinous romance swirled in absinthe abstractions Despondent sloughs bespoke the depths of my soul Saffron scars scream sonnets through metaphorical mists Oh, how morose melodies paint scabs over pastiche strophe Pregnant pause, so precious, submerged in lurid lament But then it whispered, a voice unvarnished by purple plumes A verse, it bloomed, untainted by thesaurus bleeds Sculpting off silken scaffolds pasted upon profligate poetry Leaving a profounder palate for plainer prosody Fools thought wisdom speak in sequin-laced soliloquy But wise men abrades from calligraphic charade

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Date: 5/5/2025 5:22:00 PM
Congrats. It fits the theme so well. Cute whimsical babble
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 5/6/2025 12:03:00 AM
Haha, thanks. I actually understand why people find this kind of babble appealing, although I've grown less fond of excessive metaphors over the years.
Date: 4/28/2025 3:11:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in my contest Vanya. I liked the quote you used and the last two lines
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 4/28/2025 8:20:00 PM
Thanks Oliver. This is not the type of poem I typically write, but I had fun with it.
Date: 4/9/2025 5:35:00 AM
Romance has inspired many a poem. Likewise with a ruined romance. My fave line is six. Awesome alliteration
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 4/11/2025 3:11:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. To be honest, I don't usually write about romance - ruinous or otherwise - and this is more a satire than anything else. Here's hoping it works, regardless.
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