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The Bard of Gort

Springing free from glistening Fronds The summers heat leaps for Height; Whilst drifting obscurely far Above A distant lark now hangs in Flight. Floats down his sweet trill, Accompanied by joyous and Uplifting revelry, Over the black crows nasal Calls; Whose draped shadow, contemplating devilry, Flaps and furtively falls Into ripening bean fields Planted in neatly sowed rows: Nourished in darkest till, Enriched by pedantic verse of Gaelic odes. Do now these gentle Slopes Pause to yield Where secretive song, Bursting forth, is much concealed inside the plain of Aidhne; For here the great rock of the Burren, Whereby so implored upon, Revealed its grey stones... To rebuild ancient and deserted Thoor Ballylee. Sweeping briskly past a tors Grassy island busy in bloom, Eagerly cramming under four Crouched arches, Skim the borrowed waters of Thee immortal Cloone; Dappling currents Dawdling around squat stanchions - Staunchly carrying the quiet bridge Over the old concourse: Momentarily loitering - Wantonly begging to coyly swoon... Now, joyfully sporting in gushing Discourse, Gleefully courting elusive and Glimmering enchantments: Mirrored reflections enticed to Enter - To be forever trapped within a Burbling rivers sacred rhyme and Tune. Higher and higher the spiraling Stairs of de Burgo When through airy woodland Glades The towering shadow sought; And higher and higher the spirit Of an ageing poet... His crowding thoughts Roaming freely amidst these Fabled legends of Gort. Harken then to the feathered Herald - Tis Gods design that calls on Ye! For few men know of what he Sings... He sings of the forgotten paths Forever lost within Innisfree.

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Date: 8/22/2021 9:39:00 PM
You could easily make this poem into 50 lines without changing a word John. I would love to see you choose this poem as one for the next Poetry Soup Anthology. It is one of my favorites and I hope you will consider being in the book. Blessings Connie
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Date: 2/22/2018 1:17:00 PM
I had so many favorite lines in this poem. I loved the way you described the crow. They really do come across like that!! "draped shadow contemplating devilry!!" YEssss so spot on. This whole piece made me homesick for the hills of Scotland.
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John Fleming
Date: 5/29/2018 3:25:00 AM
Thank you, Gayle...you are very kind. Please accept my sincerest apologies for the lateness of my reply; I work nights and over the last several months I became so exhausted that I even lost interest in poetry...feel a lot more refreshed now though. A real pleasure to make your acquaintance. My best regards! :) john
Date: 9/11/2017 12:08:00 PM
Wow, this is just some of the best imagery I have had the good fortune to read. You are a true talent.
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John Fleming
Date: 9/13/2017 9:02:00 AM
Thank you, Thvia...your generous comments are very much appreciated -- you are very kind! My very warmest regards! :) john
Date: 8/18/2017 8:29:00 AM
Beautiful, lyrical poem. Like a lullaby singing me home.
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John Fleming
Date: 8/18/2017 8:57:00 AM
Thank you, Patricia. The poem is a tribute to my favourite poet, W. B Yeats; it celebrates the rebuilding of the Norman tower that he purchased as his summer retreat: Thoor Ballylee...thoor means tower in Gaelic. All my very warmest regards, Patricia - Cheers! :) john
Date: 1/20/2017 6:42:00 PM
What wonderful imagery and flow, ranging well past our most gifted poets. I was swept along by lines more numerous than I can cite, bolstered by your effortless rhyme. Magnificent!
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John Fleming
Date: 1/21/2017 1:57:00 PM
Thank you, Mark...And please allow me to add that it is a real pleasure to become acquainted - Proud I am sure! All my very best - Cheers! :) john
Date: 12/28/2016 4:57:00 AM
What an enchanting journey you took me on, John. I especially liked the lines..."Momentarily loitering - Wantonly begging to coyly swoon..." The whole piece has lovely imagery. Wishing you a lovely New Year, dear. Hugs
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John Fleming
Date: 12/30/2016 9:57:00 AM
Many thanks, Eileen. I am grateful you read the poem, and pleased you thought well of it...It is one of my favourite ones. Hope you have a lovely New Year - Cheers! :) john
Date: 12/12/2016 1:00:00 AM
I really like how this draws me into its folds and scenes John, I think I shall return to this piece again as I am pressed for time right now, all the best.'
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John Fleming
Date: 12/17/2016 1:48:00 PM
Hi, Joe...Nice to hear from you again. Glad you enjoyed the poem; and thanks for the visit and kind comments - Much appreciated! My very warmest regards! :) john
Date: 9/27/2016 7:45:00 AM
Glad I found this one. Amazing poetry john, spellbound is the word. I feel.
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John Fleming
Date: 9/29/2016 3:25:00 PM
Hello again, Harry...Very nice to hear from you once more! Many thanks for the visit and the really lovely comments - Much appreciated! My very best regards. :) john
Date: 9/19/2016 11:37:00 PM
Love it
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John Fleming
Date: 9/21/2016 3:28:00 PM
Stanley...Great to become acquainted! Many thanks for the return visit - Much appreciated! My very best regards! :) john
Date: 9/17/2016 1:40:00 AM
ah yes, I remember this one! I am so impressed by your writing. Beautiful.
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John Fleming
Date: 9/17/2016 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Becca...You truly are most kind! My very best regards as always. :) john
Date: 9/11/2016 6:24:00 AM
This is very good, just lots n lots of big words, i'm going to have to skim the dictionary more, but still great job.... Signed, Tera Brown
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John Fleming
Date: 9/11/2016 2:46:00 PM
Hello, Tera. A great pleasure for me to become acquainted with your good self...Very nice to meet you; And thank you for your positive comments - Much appreciated! My best regards, Tera. :) john
Date: 8/28/2016 6:30:00 PM
LOve your poetry here old mate... Have you lived awhile in west Queensland out in the red soil dust, Where the Crows will pick your eyes out, and bore water is a must:} Anything that cant get up, the Crows take the eyes first. This was the Drovers horror, If you fell of your horse and couldn't rise. I noticed the the Crows in the US have a squeakier voice, our Crows just go Ark.
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Date: 8/29/2016 3:57:00 PM
Hi, Don. Nice to see you making a return visit to my little corner of the "Soup"...Always good to see you turning up! Many thanks for the comments - Most interesting! My very best regards, Don. :) john
Date: 8/27/2016 2:35:00 PM
Couldn't find better inspiration for poetry than Ireland! Light & Love
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Date: 8/28/2016 1:26:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie, for repaying the visit...Always a great pleasure for me to see you putting in an appearance upon my humble pages - Much obliged! My very best regards. :) john
Date: 8/27/2016 1:03:00 AM
Totally brilliant - language from another world 7! ###########ps thanks for the write up on my work
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Date: 8/27/2016 6:02:00 AM
Gail, you do me much honour with your high praise - Thank you!! My very best regards! :) john P.s I will be re-visiting your page again very soon.
Date: 8/22/2016 4:12:00 PM
IMMORTAL beauty cast forth in this image filled feast my friend. I am of Viking/Irish/English bloodlines on my father's side. Having never been to see Ireland myself this gem glowed for me. Truly you did Yeats proud and this is an honor for me to add to my fav list.. A7
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Date: 1/2/2017 5:45:00 AM
I have added this gem to my fav list and had the immense pleasure of rereading this gem several times. You have indeed given great tribute to the great man himself. My apologies for this late reply. I can not keep up with my correspondence as of late due to my health issues..... "Enter - To be forever trapped within a Burbling rivers sacred rhyme and Tune." ^^^^^ Pure gold.
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John Fleming
Date: 9/3/2016 4:20:00 PM
Robert, I would regard this as a tribute to the great man himself if you was to add this to your "Favs" list; Yeats is my favourite poet. Your kind words are always very much appreciated by me! You will find a warm welcome here at anytime, Robert...my good friend. My very best regards. :) john P.s Please accept my sincerest apologies for the late reply...I have been extremely busy with work recently.
Date: 8/8/2016 6:39:00 AM
A powerful pen...had to stop by for inspiration. A great way to start my day. INK-U-SCRIPT :)
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John Fleming
Date: 8/9/2016 3:56:00 PM
Hello, Pace. Please allow me to state that it is a great pleasure to make your acquaintance...Nice to know you! Many thanks for the lovely comments - Very much appreciated! My very best regards. :) john
Date: 8/6/2016 9:16:00 PM
Hi John, an excellent write does come forth from your golden pen and flows down the page painting your canvas wiyh such wonderful images. You have such a wonderful way with words. When one comes away from reading one of your works one knows they have read true poetry. You are a true wordsmith my friend. This piece has such wonderful content within each stanza. It has been an honour and a pleasure to read this piece. This has to be a seven and a fave. Have a good day....Mike.
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John Fleming
Date: 8/7/2016 10:11:00 AM
Mike, it is always a real pleasure for me to know you have dropped by and called in to make a much welcomed visit - Great to see you turning up! Hope you are healthy and happy....And good to see you back on the soup amongst your good friends again. Your kind and generous comments are, as ever, very much appreciated, Mike. My very best regards...And warmest wishes of course. Your friend. :) john
Date: 8/6/2016 5:58:00 AM
You did Yeats proud my friend. I do believe Angels released whispers of poetic breaths into your lungs when you were just a newborn. You take your God given gift seriously and create these masterpieces. As for me the blessing is being to read over and over your words hoping a hint of your talent might touch my hands. A Fav. Love, Armand.
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John Fleming
Date: 8/6/2016 4:17:00 PM
Armand...My dearest friend! I had nearly given up all hope of hearing from you - Such a great pleasure for me to see you visiting once again! You always pay me such wonderful comments; without the support of people like your good-self and Connie I think I may well have given up writing entirely. I have not published anything for quite a while, but, I am slowly regaining my enthusiasm...It is just a matter of making the time. Rest assured I shall be paying you a return call very soon. Many thanks, Armand! My very best regards...And my warmest wishes always. Your friend. :) john
Date: 6/5/2016 6:48:00 PM
You certainly know how to set up a beautiful and peaceful atmosphere, revolving around this gallant creature, the lark. I also love this moment: "Nourished in darkest till Enriched by pedantic verse of Gaelic odes."..you sure do immerse the senses with your descriptive and artful words. Truly mesmerising and an enjoyable read, John. Always, Laura
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John Fleming
Date: 6/6/2016 11:20:00 AM
Hi, Laura. Always a great pleasure for me to see you have visited my page once more...You know of course you are always more than welcome here. I am pleased you enjoyed the read, and yes, you are quite right, Laura...He is a gallant little creature! My very best regards...As always :) john
Date: 6/5/2016 7:24:00 AM
John, this is stunning. I truly enjoyed this one. I'm in awe of your ability to write like this!
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John Fleming
Date: 6/6/2016 11:13:00 AM
You have accorded my work some very lovely accolades over the last day or two, Becca...And these words of yours left here are no exception; I am truly most grateful for your interest and support - Thank you so very much! My very best regards....And my warmest wishes, Becca. :) john
Date: 6/5/2016 6:22:00 AM
Great penmanship. Puts me back into my Literature class - "seeing" and "feeling" what the author "sees" and "feels"! I capture the imagery and was with you all the way. God bless, RP.
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John Fleming
Date: 6/6/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thank you, R.B Promise. If this is what you experienced as you read the poem then I have accomplished my goal. Many thanks for the visit and kindly comments - It is always very much appreciated! My very best regards...And warmest wishes. :) john
Date: 6/4/2016 7:07:00 PM
A magical write John
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John Fleming
Date: 6/6/2016 11:04:00 AM
Hello, Joseph. Good to see you visiting once again. Thank you for the nice comment - Always appreciated! My very best regards! :) john
Date: 6/3/2016 1:41:00 AM
Enchanting.
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John Fleming
Date: 6/3/2016 5:32:00 PM
Hello, Archontoul. Thank you so very much for dropping in to peruse my poem...You are most welcome here! Your visit and kind comment are very much appreciated - Cheers! :) john
Date: 6/1/2016 1:48:00 PM
An interesting poem very deep and enthralling to bathe. I loved it.
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John Fleming
Date: 6/2/2016 2:25:00 AM
Hello, Deepak. Allow me to say that it is a great pleasure to make your acquaintance - Very pleased I am to know you! Thank you for visiting and leaving me such kind comments. My very best regards to you, Deepak. :) john
Date: 6/1/2016 7:30:00 AM
The more I read wonderfully conceived and constructed pieces such as this one, the more I learn how to improve my writing skills, John! I thoroughly enjoyed the read and it's definitely a - 7! Best regards. Pandita
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John Fleming
Date: 6/2/2016 2:20:00 AM
Hello again, Pandita. Thank you so very much for the visit and kind remarks - it is praise like this that motivates and encourages me to carry on! My very best regards, Pandita...And my warmest wishes. :) john
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