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The Ballerina Out on a limb, so nimble and quick, and so beautiful and full of grace; a youthful ballerina who won’t quit in this fleeting moment when she is the ‘Star’ and relies on her heart’s adamant desire throughout this treacherous love affair on the stage as her heart engages in a jealousy’s rage (as time flies by) and she dies a thousand deaths, after practicing so hard, fighting tooth and nail with the beast to be stronger, and more energetic, and elegantly more than the rest, while shunning the pleasures of life’s fruitless rewards and tells herself, she’s better than that and gives her all, and a little more (summoned up from the depths of her soul) to win the applause, the audience responds with, because ballerinas grow old, ever so quickly.

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Date: 6/30/2024 6:14:00 AM
You're always so good with non-fiction poetry. How many have given up virtually all of their youth to hear the sound of applause, or to win a shiny medal? A medal that will tarnish and fade in time, just like her
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 6/30/2024 7:56:00 AM
Nice to hear from you, Tom. You are correct, but let me say this, one can sit back and satiate themselves with fruitless rewards that they can buy, steal, cheat, kill for etc. or, train to be killing machines and pin medals on their bodies for the killing of innocent civilians (collateral damage or regrettable casualties), A ballet is a dance of innocence and beauty. Medals tarnish, except for medals that involve killing (they seem to last forever).

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