The Ballad of Truman Brown

Near an Arkansas town lives a man, Truman Brown
in the steep Ozark hills we call home.
Lack of yield from the earth takes its toll on his psyche
and he dreams of the freedom to roam.

His kids work by his side with their mom, a sweet soul.
None suspect devil traits from his bent.
Though his anger inside swells each day like the tide,
he displays not a clue, seems content.

But his heart harbors wrath as he plows rocky land,
and parlays to destroy spirit's peace.
In the dark of his mind reason leaves, hate evolves
for the one he needs most, seeks release.

He quick-steps close behind his wife's chair and pretends
as he bends for a kiss from her lips.
He withdraws wicked blade, slits her throat ear to ear
and her blood streams below, scatters drips. 

In her panic and fear, she jumps up, tries to flee
but soon wanes, buckles down on the lawn. 
Children scream, race about, overwhelmed by the threat
and retreat behind doors, deadbolts drawn.

But her stout eldest son runs outside to her form,
cradles her in his arms as she dies.
Siblings hide from the blade daddy holds at his side;
he stands mute and stares out through dead eyes.

Dalton turns upside down in the blink of an eye
with the horror of murder so vile,
and the news people race to report sad details
as police chase him down by the mile.

On his mad day in court, all the stores close their doors
o'er the deed of this man, Truman Brown,
while the judge has him bound and declares him insane
but the tale still goes 'round Dalton town.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/4/2014 8:20:00 PM
May I ask if this was a true story,then who was it really about. If you could give me specific names,dates etc. that would be great. Thank-you.
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Cona Adams
Date: 12/5/2014 7:27:00 AM
I also wrote the story as a sonnet, titled, "Murder in Our Town," in which I placed myself in the story as the eldest son, for dramatic effect, but that part is fiction.
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Cona Adams
Date: 12/5/2014 7:17:00 AM
Yes, it is a true story from my childhood, discussed and analyzed many times in my presence. Children do have big ears, but also in accurate memories. I cannot give you specific dates, and definitely not specific names. I have changed the first name of the man to protect his family. I can give you a general time and place. I am now 79, so the time was between 65 and 75 years ago, and the place was Randolph County, Arkansas, USA
Date: 11/17/2014 5:01:00 PM
very creative and well written, even if the subject matter is violent and sad.
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Cona Adams
Date: 11/17/2014 5:34:00 PM
Unfortunately, it's a true story. Thanks for your visit to read, and thanks for leaving a generous comment. This was the only murder in our entire community when I was a child. Naturally, it was the subject of many overheard conversations among the adults.
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