The Ballad of Prospector Pete

Prospector Pete had roamed the hills fer years searchin' fer gold!
He and his faithful burro, Fred, were both growin' weary and old.
He'd looked fer color in many a mountain and stream in Colorado,
Lookin' fer that mother lode, that elusive vein, his own El Dorado!

Oh, he'd found a few nuggets here and there, but didn't amount to much.
Those he did find he'd blown on gamblin', women, whiskey and such!
Pete would save a bag of dust or two from his many wanton toots,
To grubstake himself to re-supply his picks, jeans, shovels and boots.

He staked his claims along ripplin' streams and left many holes along the way.
The mountains and valleys are pocked with his many diggin's to this very day!
He'd come up dry, nothin' there, and move on to more appealin' pickin's,
Burrowin' and pannin' with elbows flyin' workin' like the dickens!

Pete would winter in his cabin 'til spring then he'd begin his annual quest,
Packin' his tools on long-sufferin' Fred and headin' fer the hills to the west.
If he didn't find that elusive bonanza this year he swore that he would retire,
To his ramshackle cabin at the foot of Mount Pisgah and enjoy the blazin' fire!

Years passed and Prospector Pete wasn't seen 'round town much anymore.
One wintry day his friends found him froze to death upon his cabin floor!
They dug Prospector Pete's grave and buried him outside his cabin door.
Eureka! Six feet down was that vein of gold that he'd been a-lookin' for!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/7/2016 2:30:00 PM
Congrats Robert, for your well, deseved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/6/2016 10:02:00 PM
Tall tale indeed, congratulations Robert...
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Date: 7/6/2016 2:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win Robert x well written x
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Date: 7/6/2016 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place, Robert. Good story, such is life! Barry
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Date: 7/6/2016 11:20:00 AM
Robert, congratulations on your well-deserved first-place win. What a tall tale with a twist. My protagonist died as well with the exception that he was buried underneath the rubble of his rickety old house. Have a happy day, Sonia.
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Date: 7/6/2016 10:24:00 AM
...just shut up and keep diggin' Well done with a caustic twist at the end...Congrats on the top spot Robert.
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Date: 7/6/2016 9:21:00 AM
A Great Win and a great tale! Always love reading your work! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/6/2016 8:40:00 AM
Such ans amusing story,Congrats Robert!
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Date: 7/6/2016 7:49:00 AM
Filled with wisdom! An excellent story and win! Congrats.
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Date: 7/6/2016 2:39:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the "Tell a Tall Tale" contest - revived an excellent ballad! - Jesse
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Date: 2/7/2015 12:22:00 AM
G'day Robert... I'm still giggling at poor old prospector Pete's misfortune. At least he paid for his funeral. Thank you Robert - Lindsay
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Date: 12/19/2013 1:37:00 PM
Hello Bob H., . Congratulations, and thank you for supporting the Ballad contest.... Forever- Linda
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Date: 10/25/2012 3:52:00 PM
Wow, Bob, awsome story. The ending is killer, no pun intended. Have a lucky day. Would make a great movie.
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Date: 10/21/2012 5:04:00 AM
Another gem to enter on my necklace, which I already have a lot from you bob. - :) :) Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/20/2012 3:28:00 PM
So funny, I can hear a song commin' on! This is the first I am reading your work, and it is very enjoyable. I want to read more!
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Date: 10/20/2012 1:56:00 PM
Always held entralled when I read your work..Enjoy this delight so much..Sara
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Date: 10/20/2012 12:54:00 PM
I feel for Prospector Pete, Bob H., this is one of the best ballads I've ever came across here on the soup. Well at least he found his gold at last... enjoyed...pd
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Date: 10/20/2012 11:40:00 AM
Too many times this happens in life - that which we seek in just below the surface, around the corner, or even right in front. Great story.
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