The Ballad of Prospector Pete

Prospector Pete had roamed the hills fer years searchin' fer gold!
He and his faithful burro, Fred, were both growin' weary and old.
He'd looked fer color in many a mountain and stream in Colorado,
Lookin' fer that mother lode, that elusive vein, his own El Dorado!

Oh, he'd found a few nuggets here and there, but didn't amount to much.
Those he did find he'd blown on gamblin', women, whiskey and such!
Pete would save a bag of dust or two from his many wanton toots,
To grubstake himself to re-supply his picks, jeans, shovels and boots.

He staked his claims along ripplin' streams and left many holes along the way.
The mountains and valleys are pocked with his many diggin's to this very day!
He'd come up dry, nothin' there, and move on to more appealin' pickin's,
Burrowin' and pannin' with elbows flyin' workin' like the dickens!

Pete would winter in his cabin 'til spring then he'd begin his annual quest,
Packin' his tools on long-sufferin' Fred and headin' fer the hills to the west.
If he didn't find that elusive bonanza this year he swore that he would retire,
To his ramshackle cabin at the foot of Mount Pisgah and enjoy the blazin' fire!

Years passed and Prospector Pete wasn't seen 'round town much anymore.
One wintry day his friends found him froze to death upon his cabin floor!
They dug Prospector Pete's grave and buried him outside his cabin door.
Eureka! Six feet down was that vein of gold that he'd been a-lookin' for!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kimathi Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Congrats Robert, for your well, deseved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
Smith Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 10:02 PM
Tall tale indeed, congratulations Robert...
Rycroft Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 2:46 PM
Congrats on your win Robert x well written x
Stebbings Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 12:36 PM
Congratulations on your first place, Robert. Good story, such is life! Barry
Walker Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Robert, congratulations on your well-deserved first-place win. What a tall tale with a twist. My protagonist died as well with the exception that he was buried underneath the rubble of his rickety old house. Have a happy day, Sonia.
Lawless Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 10:24 AM
...just shut up and keep diggin' Well done with a caustic twist at the end...Congrats on the top spot Robert.
Eastman Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 9:21 AM
A Great Win and a great tale! Always love reading your work! Congratulations on your win!
Chansarkar Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Such ans amusing story,Congrats Robert!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 7:49 AM
Filled with wisdom! An excellent story and win! Congrats.
Day Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 2:39 AM
Congrats on your win in the "Tell a Tall Tale" contest - revived an excellent ballad! - Jesse
Laurie Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 12:22 AM
G'day Robert... I'm still giggling at poor old prospector Pete's misfortune. At least he paid for his funeral. Thank you Robert - Lindsay
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December 19, 2013 at 1:37 PM
Hello Bob H., . Congratulations, and thank you for supporting the Ballad contest.... Forever- Linda
Johnson Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 3:52 PM
Wow, Bob, awsome story. The ending is killer, no pun intended. Have a lucky day. Would make a great movie.
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 5:04 AM
Another gem to enter on my necklace, which I already have a lot from you bob. - :) :) Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Burd Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 3:28 PM
So funny, I can hear a song commin' on! This is the first I am reading your work, and it is very enjoyable. I want to read more!
Kendrick Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 1:56 PM
Always held entralled when I read your work..Enjoy this delight so much..Sara
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October 20, 2012 at 12:54 PM
I feel for Prospector Pete, Bob H., this is one of the best ballads I've ever came across here on the soup. Well at least he found his gold at last... enjoyed...pd
Grisetti Avatar
October 20, 2012 at 11:40 AM
Too many times this happens in life - that which we seek in just below the surface, around the corner, or even right in front. Great story.
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